Forest Secrets
Missing21 total reviews
Comment from shaffer40
I didn't know what to expect by the title and the beginning of the story, but you surprised me, and I didn't know whether to laugh or shiver. There was something especially creepy about a ten-year-old holding his dad in his hand and looking into his eyes. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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I didn't know what to expect by the title and the beginning of the story, but you surprised me, and I didn't know whether to laugh or shiver. There was something especially creepy about a ten-year-old holding his dad in his hand and looking into his eyes. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much for reading.
Comment from Gail Denham
Poor Dad. I suppose you could take him home and keep him in the bathtub - that's what some kids in the south do with alligators I hear and many kids like to collect critters.
Well, she must have gotten pretty upset to send your dad into the forest.
Good story, held the interest.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Poor Dad. I suppose you could take him home and keep him in the bathtub - that's what some kids in the south do with alligators I hear and many kids like to collect critters.
Well, she must have gotten pretty upset to send your dad into the forest.
Good story, held the interest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Thanks for reading, Gail.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Maria Jose, you are really good at these fairy tale stories. I wish I had a six. So the mother was a witch but the father came back to communicate with his beloved daughter. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Hi Maria Jose, you are really good at these fairy tale stories. I wish I had a six. So the mother was a witch but the father came back to communicate with his beloved daughter. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Thanks for reading and for your kind words, Ulla. Big hug.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
She was a witch! Oh dear, I think I would make sure I did my homework and a few chores around the house, just in case... lol. I wonder, did the little girl take him home? That would have been fun. Wonderful again. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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She was a witch! Oh dear, I think I would make sure I did my homework and a few chores around the house, just in case... lol. I wonder, did the little girl take him home? That would have been fun. Wonderful again. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Of course she took him home... and hid him in her room.
Thanks for reading.
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Lol! I do like a happy ending!! lol
Comment from Y. M. Roger
And you always thought the cat might have actually 'run away' as well... LOL!! :) :) Loved this little super-natural write for the morning, Maria! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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And you always thought the cat might have actually 'run away' as well... LOL!! :) :) Loved this little super-natural write for the morning, Maria! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Thanks for your review, Yvette.
Comment from Judy Swanson
So- another childhood story that feels a bit like a fairy tale and that should have a deeper, metaphorical meaning. I'm surprised that the narrator here didn't find a pig in the forest! But, I think the dragon, especially a small hand-sized dragon, is so much more mystical and mythical.
Judy
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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So- another childhood story that feels a bit like a fairy tale and that should have a deeper, metaphorical meaning. I'm surprised that the narrator here didn't find a pig in the forest! But, I think the dragon, especially a small hand-sized dragon, is so much more mystical and mythical.
Judy
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Thanks for your sweet review, Judy.
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Thanks for sharing your sweet story. Judy
Comment from Debra White
Hi Maria :)
I love the way how you blend the ordinary with the magical and come up with something original and wonderful every time.
You've gone from mum and dad calling each other a witch and a pig, to dad ending up as a teeny dragon and mum being a real witch!
Funny and entertaining - what's not to love?!
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Hi Maria :)
I love the way how you blend the ordinary with the magical and come up with something original and wonderful every time.
You've gone from mum and dad calling each other a witch and a pig, to dad ending up as a teeny dragon and mum being a real witch!
Funny and entertaining - what's not to love?!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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I'm glad you liked it, Debra.
Thanks for your review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story about the secrets the forests hold. When someone goes missing and they cannot be found look out for dragons until you see the missing person's eyes in a dragon face.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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A very well-written story about the secrets the forests hold. When someone goes missing and they cannot be found look out for dragons until you see the missing person's eyes in a dragon face.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from royowen
I had to have a little giggle at this one, the little girl's dad had been turned into a little lizard, so in the girl's experience the fact get her dad called her a witch...it was true! Well done Maria, an excellent story, blessjnfs, Roy
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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I had to have a little giggle at this one, the little girl's dad had been turned into a little lizard, so in the girl's experience the fact get her dad called her a witch...it was true! Well done Maria, an excellent story, blessjnfs, Roy
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Thanks for your kind words, Roy. Have a lovely evening. Maybe morning for you...
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Yep good Friday morning here, happy Easter
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Happy Easter 🐣!
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Happy Easter 🐣!
Comment from 24chas
This was a great little story, Maria. I'm amazed at the way you can come up with these mini-masterpieces seemingly at will. They all have such a smooth readability to them and a good ending. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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This was a great little story, Maria. I'm amazed at the way you can come up with these mini-masterpieces seemingly at will. They all have such a smooth readability to them and a good ending. Nicely done.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much for reading, Charles.
