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Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "April Fifteen"My 2019 NaPoWriMo poetic exploration.
13 total reviews
Comment from Sasha
I am sure I am repeating myself, but I apologize for the short reviews because I still have 112 messages left in my inbox and desperately need to rebuild my pumps and funny money I lost while not being here. I watched this on television and was overwhelmed with shock at the horrific fire. this is a marvelous chapter in your book on giving, for NaPoWriMo Day 15
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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I am sure I am repeating myself, but I apologize for the short reviews because I still have 112 messages left in my inbox and desperately need to rebuild my pumps and funny money I lost while not being here. I watched this on television and was overwhelmed with shock at the horrific fire. this is a marvelous chapter in your book on giving, for NaPoWriMo Day 15
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Hi Sasha -
I was struck by all of the tragedies that have occurred on April 15th throughout the years and just had to write an acrostic to give bring it to light. Thank you for all of the great comments.
Kim
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No apologies necessary.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem in honor of the Note dame cathedral's devastating fire that destroyed the more than eight hundred year building with millions of damages.
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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A very well-written poem in honor of the Note dame cathedral's devastating fire that destroyed the more than eight hundred year building with millions of damages.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Hi Sandra -
It is such a tragedy. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Kim
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
It's crazy how a date can have so many horrible things happen on it. It is also my nephews birthday so I guess it does have one good thing going for it. You did great with this tribute
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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It's crazy how a date can have so many horrible things happen on it. It is also my nephews birthday so I guess it does have one good thing going for it. You did great with this tribute
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Thank you for this excellent review. It really does seem to be a day of infamy!
Kim
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for sharing this news story in verse and how these major terrible events all occurred on April Fifteenth. I didn't know. Good job with the acrostic, Kim!
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Thanks for sharing this news story in verse and how these major terrible events all occurred on April Fifteenth. I didn't know. Good job with the acrostic, Kim!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Hi Helen,
I was really struck by all the things that had happened on April 15 through the years. Thanks for the excellent review.
Kim
Comment from frogbook
A very current and very sad subject for this poetic piece. Your afterword was much enjoyed to, as it has been heartwarming to see the unified response. Also interesting and disquieting to note the things that have happened on this date.
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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A very current and very sad subject for this poetic piece. Your afterword was much enjoyed to, as it has been heartwarming to see the unified response. Also interesting and disquieting to note the things that have happened on this date.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Thank you, frogbook. Definitely and infamous date. I appreciate your comments.
Kim
Comment from sunnilicious
April 15th appears to have been a bad day in general with that history. Your poem came wonderfully. You are truly a loving individual with a big caring heart. I was touched by your written emotional journey of the event. Excellent verbiage. Nice alliteration of E-words at the end. Good use of the consonances -ed and -ity. Beautiful work.
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April 15th appears to have been a bad day in general with that history. Your poem came wonderfully. You are truly a loving individual with a big caring heart. I was touched by your written emotional journey of the event. Excellent verbiage. Nice alliteration of E-words at the end. Good use of the consonances -ed and -ity. Beautiful work.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
Comment from Pantygynt
I won't try and emulate this. I am posting my own contribution to this conflagration this evening at around 1.00 pm Eastern as an entry into the six word poetry contest.
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I won't try and emulate this. I am posting my own contribution to this conflagration this evening at around 1.00 pm Eastern as an entry into the six word poetry contest.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
Comment from bmethner
Beautiful reminder of the event that brought us all to such reality about life. Your gentle flow and well placed rhyme brought a heart felt link of all the world to watch this sad occurrence. Beautifully written.
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Beautiful reminder of the event that brought us all to such reality about life. Your gentle flow and well placed rhyme brought a heart felt link of all the world to watch this sad occurrence. Beautifully written.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
Comment from James Upshaw
Good poem. I have seen great numbers of poems submitted here that are about the cathedral. Good to know we have writers that stay current. Good job! I love it.
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Good poem. I have seen great numbers of poems submitted here that are about the cathedral. Good to know we have writers that stay current. Good job! I love it.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A tragedy for Paris and thy are all in mourning. Paris has been marred by fire and moving forward means they just have to work hard to renovate Notre Dame, a chilling an poignant write, love Dolly x
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A tragedy for Paris and thy are all in mourning. Paris has been marred by fire and moving forward means they just have to work hard to renovate Notre Dame, a chilling an poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
