Comment from l.raven

Excellent

LOL...this was my fathers idea to
pulling our teeth...good thing it
wasn't our mothers...love your poem...and love the picture...very well written...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019

Thank you.

reply by l.raven on 19-Apr-2019

you are so very welcome Melissa...love xxoo

Comment from KyColonel Randal

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this poem. This piece has the number of syllables indicated. I have been lucky so far in that my kids have thus far managed to pull their own baby teeth without the need for doors, car bumpers, etc. I love your old-timey illustration and changes to the font. Perhaps you might add different colors for font and background? Good luck with your contest entry!

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019

Thanks for the great review.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your 575 Mystery Author. Good job with the prompt. Your poem is unique and expressed well. The syllable count per line is correct, too. The picture is a nice pairing. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019

Thanks so much, Jan.

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Contest Author,

Ha ha ha! Cute poem with a great supporting visual image. My dad had a good way of "just checking" with a couple wiggles, then quickly snapping them out, if they were ready. lol Thanks for the trip down memory lane and good luck. Jan :-)

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019

I appreciate your review and comments, Jan!!