NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Peas"A poem a day - April 2019
12 total reviews
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
Peasy does it with this whitney, inspired by a fun day out in the garden and Ben doesn't know what he is missing in fresh peas :) This has the usual wonderful cadence, that rolls along telling smile inducing story!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Peasy does it with this whitney, inspired by a fun day out in the garden and Ben doesn't know what he is missing in fresh peas :) This has the usual wonderful cadence, that rolls along telling smile inducing story!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Cheers Dale :) Your feedback is appreciate as always! Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Dawn Munro
LOL - why, Ben, why!
Peas are fine and sweet and green!
I'll eat yours, unless you're mean
and toss them off your dinner plate
in abject veg-o-matic hate... (LOL)
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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LOL - why, Ben, why!
Peas are fine and sweet and green!
I'll eat yours, unless you're mean
and toss them off your dinner plate
in abject veg-o-matic hate... (LOL)
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Hahaha!
Love your poetic feedback, Dawn!
Thank you :) love Debra x
Comment from BeasPeas
This is so nice, Debra. You and your family have had a great day of planting together. I especially like this post because it features peas. Being a vegetarian one of Bea's peas I have to like it. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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This is so nice, Debra. You and your family have had a great day of planting together. I especially like this post because it features peas. Being a vegetarian one of Bea's peas I have to like it. Marilyn
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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LOL! Thanks so much, Marilyn :)
Glad you enjoyed the poem! Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Sally Law
What a charmed and sweet life, and an English gardener, too. I love that song, Sitting in an English Garden, by David Lanz. Do you know it? I thought of it today as I read your poem and tribute to peas. Every family has their difficult eater. Just like your Ben.
All my best,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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What a charmed and sweet life, and an English gardener, too. I love that song, Sitting in an English Garden, by David Lanz. Do you know it? I thought of it today as I read your poem and tribute to peas. Every family has their difficult eater. Just like your Ben.
All my best,
Sal xo
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Hi Sal :)
I don't know that song, but I will look it up now!
Thanks for your lovely feedback :)
I love to garden - I've spent the past couple of days working hard in the garden and it's starting to take shape again :)
Best wishes, Debra xx
Comment from JudyE
Won't it be great looking on as a grandmother and watching Ben trying to get his kids to eat vegies? Well, we can dream, can't we? lol Oh, dear, need a few more characters - have a great day.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Won't it be great looking on as a grandmother and watching Ben trying to get his kids to eat vegies? Well, we can dream, can't we? lol Oh, dear, need a few more characters - have a great day.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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LOL! I will watch and laugh....Thanks for the feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from robyn corum
Debra,
hahahahaha! What fun! So... he almost had you, huh? But I do bet you that you'll get a lot closer to getting him to eat THOSE veggies than any others. Good luck with that! Enjoyed!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Debra,
hahahahaha! What fun! So... he almost had you, huh? But I do bet you that you'll get a lot closer to getting him to eat THOSE veggies than any others. Good luck with that! Enjoyed!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thanks, Robyn :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Heather Knight
I'm glad you had fun. You can't complain: this time they've chosen the garden over the television.
Another lovely little poem. You never disappoint.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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I'm glad you had fun. You can't complain: this time they've chosen the garden over the television.
Another lovely little poem. You never disappoint.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Ah, thank you Maria :) Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Rachelle Allen
NOW we're talking a delightful vacation day!! I knew eventually they'd grow tired of the telly, but I also think they must have needed that down time first. I like this poem very much - and, once again, you have found SUCH a perfect photo to go with your delightful work! Great job, Debra. xo
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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NOW we're talking a delightful vacation day!! I knew eventually they'd grow tired of the telly, but I also think they must have needed that down time first. I like this poem very much - and, once again, you have found SUCH a perfect photo to go with your delightful work! Great job, Debra. xo
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much, Rachelle :)
I appreciate your feedback as always, love Debra
Comment from Teri7
This is a really neat poem you have penned about peas using the Whitney format. It sounds like you had a great day outdoors with your family doing things in the garden. My husband and I will be doing that shortly. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Love the picture of the peas! love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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This is a really neat poem you have penned about peas using the Whitney format. It sounds like you had a great day outdoors with your family doing things in the garden. My husband and I will be doing that shortly. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Love the picture of the peas! love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much, Teri :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from 24chas
This was a fun read, Debra. You seem to really be having a pleasant time writing these pieces. I love the whole family seems to be involved in them. Great job.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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This was a fun read, Debra. You seem to really be having a pleasant time writing these pieces. I love the whole family seems to be involved in them. Great job.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much, Chas :) It's nice to pick moments from the day to write about in this short format. It's almost like a little diary!
Best wishes, Debra :)
