The Clock
Relief after an operation2 total reviews
Comment from Rmocruz
Your universal message is clearly presented in this correctly formatted,
worthy five-seven-five contest entry. You have chosen an appropriate
visual art to complement this theme.
Well crafted, best wishes.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Your universal message is clearly presented in this correctly formatted,
worthy five-seven-five contest entry. You have chosen an appropriate
visual art to complement this theme.
Well crafted, best wishes.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the read and the review. Much appreciated.
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You're welcome, my pleasure.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Ha ha! This is a great senryu and a super contest entry. I like the happy ending. Nothing here amiss for me to suggest revising. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
Ha ha! This is a great senryu and a super contest entry. I like the happy ending. Nothing here amiss for me to suggest revising. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the read and the review. Much appreciated.
