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Service over Self

Men and women who put their lives at risk

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Comment from frogbook
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A very sad example of how these brave souls are cut down when helping another. So very sad and many are either very young or so sad, also about to retire. Best of luck in the voting.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
    Thank you for taking the time to read and for your comments.
Comment from Gypsymooncat
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Goodness, I have to get the tissues out to read the entries in this contest! This is another heart wrenching piece, and one that points out that not only is the job of a Police Officer a risk to their life as soon as they don that uniform, but life itself can turn on a dime and snuff a life out. Ironic that he didn't die from the job itself, but rather an idiot who was driving stupidly. What a bloody shame, but what a fine poem! Good luck xoxoxoxox

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Thank you for your read and your comments. It is so difficult for a family to think a husband and father may not return from his job.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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They are certainly the rarest of breed.
What a heart-wrenching tale here, depicted so well by your talented choice of words. The photo is amazing, too. I know this will do well in the contest. Good luck to you. xo

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Thanks for your read and your comments.
Comment from Bill Pinder
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Good poem expressing honor for police officers in the dangerous work that they do. It is really sad when one is killed with an accident as stupid as that. It could easily have been prevented.
Bill

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
    Thank you for your read and comments.
Comment from RodG
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This particular incident you describe occurred in Chicago and I could not believe the news reports. An excellent job of describing exactly what happened to the policeman. I also commend your uncommon use of ABCA rhyming.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
    Thank you for your read and comments. Much appreciated. I did not want the rhyme to be to sing song. Glad you think it worked.