Baffled by Science
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Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Baffled by Science, has the correct framing and leaves most wondering how it all works and why anything orbits around anything else. They're so small.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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This 5-7-5, Baffled by Science, has the correct framing and leaves most wondering how it all works and why anything orbits around anything else. They're so small.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Science can make idiots of us all. Such tiny things; such huge distances; such vast space etc. Thanks, Bill, for your review.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer, (--wink--)
This is AWESOME! I only wish I had written it myself. Except that I don't think I would know all these words all by myself. hahahaha! This is so fun and cool. I wish you lots of luck in the voting! Go get 'em!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Dear Mystery Writer, (--wink--)
This is AWESOME! I only wish I had written it myself. Except that I don't think I would know all these words all by myself. hahahaha! This is so fun and cool. I wish you lots of luck in the voting! Go get 'em!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Cool review, Robyn. Thanks very much. Science can make me feel like a dummy.
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a cute entry for the 5-7-5 contest. I like how all of the words rhyme and carry a fun meaning. Well done and good luck in the contest.
All the best!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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This is a cute entry for the 5-7-5 contest. I like how all of the words rhyme and carry a fun meaning. Well done and good luck in the contest.
All the best!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Luckily, science helped me out by calling them protons, neutrons and electrons! then made morons out of us.
Thanks for your review.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yep, they sure do, Anonymous Poet.
During every single second of every single minute of every waking hour of every single day of each long month, during every single year.
In other words, 24/7, all the time.
Good 5-7-5.
It would be hilarious if it weren't so true!
Good luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Yep, they sure do, Anonymous Poet.
During every single second of every single minute of every waking hour of every single day of each long month, during every single year.
In other words, 24/7, all the time.
Good 5-7-5.
It would be hilarious if it weren't so true!
Good luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Well, let's call it truly hilarious.
cheers for the review, Dean.
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Okay, it's truly hilarious, lol.
You're very welcome.
Comment from shaffer40
I got a kick out of this poem -- describes me, I guess. I believe science, but I'm bewildered by, and totally uneducated in, the subject. The picture is so appropriate. Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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I got a kick out of this poem -- describes me, I guess. I believe science, but I'm bewildered by, and totally uneducated in, the subject. The picture is so appropriate. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Science can be overwhelming and make us feel like idiots.
I'm glad you got a kick out of the poem.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Great alliteration here in your five seven five, and the sentiments are true because all this is way above most heads, not sure they are morons, but the word rhymes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Great alliteration here in your five seven five, and the sentiments are true because all this is way above most heads, not sure they are morons, but the word rhymes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Not understanding makes me feel like a moron! I hope I don't offend anyone. Thanks for your review.
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He he he, you?re not on your own! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment from humpwhistle
Not just moron's heads. I'll bet most physicists can't conjugate verbs the way a writer can. Some look deep, some look big.
We all see something different.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Not just moron's heads. I'll bet most physicists can't conjugate verbs the way a writer can. Some look deep, some look big.
We all see something different.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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And therein lies the beauty and the angst. Thanks for your comments, Lee.
Comment from 24chas
I really liked this read. It made me chuckle at the end. The word moron is funny enough but in the context of this poem, it's hilarious. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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I really liked this read. It made me chuckle at the end. The word moron is funny enough but in the context of this poem, it's hilarious. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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I might have offended some morons possibly. Thanks for reviewing. You are clearly not a moron.
