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NaPoWriMo 2019

Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Once Again"
A poem a day - April 2019

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Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
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A whitney about missing whitney... and so where do we find it, on the sideboard, behind the refrigerator, by the pond with the lilies with the frogs? Looks like you found inspiration in not actually writing one initially! A great whitney indeed.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
    LOL! Whitney is hiding in a good spot today - can't find her anywhere...
    Better look a bit harder! Cheers Dale, best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from 24chas
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Yes, I will accept it. :) It was a good read, Debra. The flow of it was fun and I think the artwork you chose really made it clear this was all about the amusement. Good job.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Thank you so much Chas :) Glad it's acceptable! Best wishes as always, Debra :)
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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I had to chuckle as I know how you felt when midnight came and went and I thought, oops I forgot to get on site and add. Excellently done whitney as usual

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Thank you so much, Barb :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Sally Law
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More than acceptable, and the art is a scream. I just attached your lovely head to the body and laughed my ass off! You are the comic relief in my life here at FanStory. A fine Whitney, again, dear Debra.
All my best,
Sal xo

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    LOL! Sal! Do I look good with a frog's body?!
    Thanks for your fun feedback.
    Sending you my best as always, Debra :)
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Well, I'M giving it a four thumbs up (that would be two for yesterday and two for today). Who among us can't identify with THIS syndrome! Another adorable write! You are making the BEST compilation, Debra!! I can see it appealing to moms and kids everywhere! xo

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Aw, thanks for the 4 thumbs, Rachelle :)
    Sending my best as always, Debra x
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your Whitney is acceptable, Debra! I enjoyed reading it. I believe many will identify with your well-chosen words. Good job on its style. I like the rhymes. Thanks for sharing. Well, your month of poem a day is half over. Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Thank you so much, Jan :) I appreciate your feedback as always.
    Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Bill Pinder
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Thanks for sharing this poem about struggling with motivation. I wonder if a frog struggles with motivation? They seem like they can pretty much take it easy and hang out on the Lillypad's.
Bill

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    LOL! Thanks for your feedback, Bill :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from LisaMay
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I salute you for keeping up with this challenge and only slipping by the odd day. Your poems are a delight. I bet looking for suitable pictures to accompany your poems is very time consuming too... probably more so than writing your poems, which you have got down to a fine art.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Hi LisaMay :)
    Yep, often finding the right picture takes longer than writing the poem!
    Thanks for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I know what you mean about time running away with you! Doesn't it go fast??? Yes, this is most acceptable, lol. I can only sit back and admire all of you who are doing this, it must be so time-consuming, reviewing as well to put it out there. Well done, Debs, it's an apt one for that very reason. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Thanks so much, Sandra :) Yep, I'm struggling to keep up at the moment - I set myself an ambitious challenge!!
    Sending love, Debra :) x
Comment from Heather Knight
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I missed you yesterday, but you've made up for your absence with this little poem.
Cute as usual, well written, fun. And the artwork is sweet.
Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to the next one.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Hi Maria :) I miss you too! Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and encouragement. I appreciate it :) Best wishes as always, Debra x
    ps: Love your new profile picture :)