A Torn Life
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Comment from Heather Knight
Thanks for sharing another poem on this important topic.
I didn't know April was child abuse prevention month.
Your presentation is perfect to reflect the confusion some children feel.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thanks for sharing another poem on this important topic.
I didn't know April was child abuse prevention month.
Your presentation is perfect to reflect the confusion some children feel.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your kind review
Hugs Trisha
Comment from frogbook
A great form to show the chaotic thoughts of a child trapped in this no win situation. Current and relevant for the month. Very eye-catching for the reader and made one pay attention to get in order.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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A great form to show the chaotic thoughts of a child trapped in this no win situation. Current and relevant for the month. Very eye-catching for the reader and made one pay attention to get in order.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your kind review
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Bill Pinder
Thanks for sharing the century. Narcissism is a terrible problem for anyone to experience, especially a child who is totally defenseless. Everyone needs to work together to spread the word about this problem.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thanks for sharing the century. Narcissism is a terrible problem for anyone to experience, especially a child who is totally defenseless. Everyone needs to work together to spread the word about this problem.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your kind review
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem. It is very sad that children who are innocent has to deal with their parents insecurities while growing up without a very small chance of becoming a confident adult.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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A very well-written heartfelt poem. It is very sad that children who are innocent has to deal with their parents insecurities while growing up without a very small chance of becoming a confident adult.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your kind review
Hugs Trisha
Comment from humpwhistle
I applaud your message. It's timely, strong, and relevant.
Forgive me, but I wonder if your presentation distracts from your message. To me, it reads like a puzzle rather than a serious condemnation of abuse. Sometimes messages are lost in the trappings.
Just one man's opinion.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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I applaud your message. It's timely, strong, and relevant.
Forgive me, but I wonder if your presentation distracts from your message. To me, it reads like a puzzle rather than a serious condemnation of abuse. Sometimes messages are lost in the trappings.
Just one man's opinion.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your kind review. It IS a puzzle for the child/ren left wondering what they did to get punishment or abuse, That was my rationale for displaying the words that way, but I respect your opinion, no forgiveness needed on either side
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
The way you spaced your words and colored them for emphasis carries a lot of impact. It shows how shattered and confused a life of abuse must be. Great presentation.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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The way you spaced your words and colored them for emphasis carries a lot of impact. It shows how shattered and confused a life of abuse must be. Great presentation.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you, not everyone saw the reasoning for the presentation. I?m
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Their loss. 8-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are attacking child abuse full on with these repeated writes on the subject Trisha. This one is a powerful and profound and obviously damaging to the child, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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You are attacking child abuse full on with these repeated writes on the subject Trisha. This one is a powerful and profound and obviously damaging to the child, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your kind review, I want to reach as many as possible
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Tina Crute
This is so true! I feel for the child who doesn't have a mentor or parent worth copying. The picture of narcissism at the top is different yet effective. You brought up an excellent point that I have not thought of before... A child is trying to form self-worth and find their identity, at the same time their parent is fighting them on it. I am reading a book about foster kids and abuse they eventually overcome.
Sad but real. This is an important write and truth.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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This is so true! I feel for the child who doesn't have a mentor or parent worth copying. The picture of narcissism at the top is different yet effective. You brought up an excellent point that I have not thought of before... A child is trying to form self-worth and find their identity, at the same time their parent is fighting them on it. I am reading a book about foster kids and abuse they eventually overcome.
Sad but real. This is an important write and truth.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your kind and special review
Hugs Trisha
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This really spoke to me. My daughter teaches in a school where every child has a bad home life:(
You are welcome for the review. You write from the heart and very well too!
Blessings,
Tina
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Thank you Tina, for your kind words
Comment from LisaMay
Your erratic jaggedy colourful presentation is a very good summary of the issue of child abuse. It covers the emotions children have to deal with when under the impact of toxic parenting.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Your erratic jaggedy colourful presentation is a very good summary of the issue of child abuse. It covers the emotions children have to deal with when under the impact of toxic parenting.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your kind review
Hugs Trisha
