Comment from Mia Twysted

Good

Some of the wording threw me off. It wasn't as smooth as I believe it could be. I do like the story and feel for the poor man who is being stood up.

Good Luck

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Well, she was late and/or working, but not at what she told Rob. I enjoyed reading your little story, Mystery Author. Good job with your few words as allowed. It seems that Hob needs to find someone else to love in the City of Lights. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019

Thanks for taking time to read zanya

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

A heartbroken young man with a two-timing woman. You did a good job on your flash fiction. I see nothing to recommend to you. Have a great evening. Shirley

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019

Thanks for those encouraging words zanya