Mother Earth is our home
How we as a whole treat the Lady of our lives.6 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow, this is a very powerful and emotional appeal you have written in only 100-words... I would wonder, however, if it should be in a 'fiction' contest..? I will leave that to you and the committee to decide! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Wow, this is a very powerful and emotional appeal you have written in only 100-words... I would wonder, however, if it should be in a 'fiction' contest..? I will leave that to you and the committee to decide! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Yeah, Yvette, it is non-fiction, but that is what came out as I wrote. I should write before I write and make sure it is what it is. It got disqualified, but no problem the feeling and the words are out there for minds to ponder. :)
Comment from 24chas
This was a good write. It makes a lot of sense that we need to help protect the planet for the future generations. We have no alternative at this time. Good job.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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This was a good write. It makes a lot of sense that we need to help protect the planet for the future generations. We have no alternative at this time. Good job.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you, I'm glad you understand.
Comment from Nanny 6
You tell a good plea to try to wake people up to the disaster heading our way if we don't wake up and see the signs of nature begging us to do something positive for our planet. Good luck in the contest.
Judy
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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You tell a good plea to try to wake people up to the disaster heading our way if we don't wake up and see the signs of nature begging us to do something positive for our planet. Good luck in the contest.
Judy
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you Judy. Let's hope it made a dent in somebody's head.
Comment from LisaMay
You say you don't, but I think you have every idea what this means. Your story is a very strong advocacy for environmental protection and a respect for Mother Nature to treat our only Earth in the right manner for our very survival. Your pen is mighty.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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You say you don't, but I think you have every idea what this means. Your story is a very strong advocacy for environmental protection and a respect for Mother Nature to treat our only Earth in the right manner for our very survival. Your pen is mighty.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you Lisa. Though it was disqualified the words are out there to make people think.
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That's a pity. My commiserations. What reason was given for the disqualification?
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork for your story.
-Notes are appreciated.
-Your first few words are
a great hook and very effective.
-You have personalized
Mother Earth very well, and
show her feelings with vivid
imagery: "she's crying" and
"shakes our foundation."
-I like the ending when you
show Mother Earth trying to
clean up our air, only to
be impeded by the government.
-A very good ending, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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-Good artwork for your story.
-Notes are appreciated.
-Your first few words are
a great hook and very effective.
-You have personalized
Mother Earth very well, and
show her feelings with vivid
imagery: "she's crying" and
"shakes our foundation."
-I like the ending when you
show Mother Earth trying to
clean up our air, only to
be impeded by the government.
-A very good ending, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you Pam. I did what you asked and it rocks. :) but it is non-fiction.
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You are very welcome, and I was happy to help and am glad it worked for you. I revised your review, as well.
Comment from Bill Pinder
Thanks for sharing this flash fiction story about the earth. It is true that we all need to work together to take better care of the earths resources. God has blessed us with an amazing earth and more people need to wake up and appreciate it and not abuse it for the sake of greed.
Bill
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thanks for sharing this flash fiction story about the earth. It is true that we all need to work together to take better care of the earths resources. God has blessed us with an amazing earth and more people need to wake up and appreciate it and not abuse it for the sake of greed.
Bill
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you Bill. Though it got disqualified (it is a non-fiction work) the words and feelings are out there to make people think. :)
