Little Poems
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Comment from Gail Denham
Good job with that form. It works. There was at least one line that stopped me - "unknown symbols in fool's behalf." - I didn't question the form, but the statement.
I wondered why you said the symbols were by fools? Just something that stopped me for a minute.
Excellent use of the form I think.
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Good job with that form. It works. There was at least one line that stopped me - "unknown symbols in fool's behalf." - I didn't question the form, but the statement.
I wondered why you said the symbols were by fools? Just something that stopped me for a minute.
Excellent use of the form I think.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you Gail. Ah, there I was thinking about graffiti.
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oh I see - all that was there - I did miss that - sorry.
