Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This free verse, The Cloak of Romance, finds the couple using the night environment to camouflage their actions which are hoped to begin immediately.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019

Thank you ever so kindly for the review friend.

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

I have to wonder who 'we' are. I've never developed 'sun-crest wings of love's grandiose perfection'. Maybe next year. Extreme romance intrigues me. Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019

We remain as lovers that chase the dream with grace, we also form a divine radiance to each, love is great my friend.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Hello Gordon,
You've written an excellent free verse poem
with wonderful descriptive imagery.
We all seek a passion that never fades or rusts,
that cloak of night is adorned with stars.
Well done
Robert

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019

Thank you ever so kindly for the great review. Many blessings friend.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is so romantic Gordon and these words should be in a private note to your loved one. Your words remind me of the ancient writers and how they would write love notes for others to use. Your poem is enchanting and magical, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019

Such a delight to hear this from you. May God bless and tend to you and your day.