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Renaissance of Enchantment

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It was their world long before our existence...

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Comment from JudyE
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I think Addison might enjoy his time in his new home.

One very small point:
"Yes." The answer was a chorus of both Kato and Koko, the latter looking up but briefly from his desk assembly. - I might have said 'from both....' but I doubt it matters.

Cheers
Judy

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
    Certainly gonna be an adventure for everyone, yeah? LOL! :) Thanx, Lady Judy! ;) Yvette
Comment from royowen
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I love the strange fellowship of the refuge. All worthy and imaginitive "inmates" , all worthy of their particular place in the function of the collective, although odd, and forced to accept each other, but really perhaps, should live apart, but isn't that collective humanity. Odd bods forced to "get on" because we need one another...hence a tendency to gossip, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : Kato frowned (at) him.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Thanx for the catch, Roy!! :) And, oh, yeah, even super-naturals gossip! ;) ;) LOL! :) Thanx for the review and for your continued support of Maggie and company! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by royowen on 18-Apr-2019
    Most welcome
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written chapter, it seems everyone is busy preparing for the new-comers and there is a little excitement because of the boy that will also be part of the household from now on.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Thank you so very much for stopping in for a review on this installment, Sandra -- I do so appreciate your support! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from aryr
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An enjoyable yet informative chapter Yvette. It is amazing that things are pulling together as well as they are. All of the misfits really want Maggie and Addy to be comfortable and to feel at home. I was impressed the way Kato just stepped into control. You did a great job with this chapter.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
    Oh, thank you for stopping by on this one, Ali -- I do so appreciate your input as another prose author. Glad you enjoyed getting to know 'the guys' -- thanx for your continued support of Maggie and company! :) ;) Take care, ma'am and have a wonderful remainder of the week! ;) Yvette :)
reply by aryr on 18-Apr-2019
    You are so welcome Yvette, MMM ma'am, now I really feel my age lol.
Comment from Sally Law
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A good chapter and just the right length for someone who is catching up. I can see Kato and Koko in my mind's eye! This is an intersection of characters whose connections I don't see just yet, but aI am sure I will in the upcoming installments. A new life for many, it seems.
All my best,
Sal xo

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
    Hey, there, Sal! ;) Thanx for trying to catch up -- with the release of the beginning of the next chapter, I'm gonna do one of those promotions that will pay your points/funnymoney for every previous section so just sit back and plan some time this weekend to catch up! ;) :) After that though, the author's life is going to explode and there will probably not be much until the end of May (got 3 grads, 2 'movings', and MORE!). You take care out there and I'll be in and out... LOL! :) :) Yvette
Comment from poetwatch
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Good morning Yvette. I'm still daze, my mind's in a maze, but I saw you Refuge story and I had to read it before coffee. It is good of course and if you hadn't penned that it was a short installment, well... I need my coffee. Thank you for sharing your style of writing. Waiting for the next one, :)

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
    Thanx, Jose -- I've got one more post before my life is overcome by events until summer! :) Got three graduations (law, undergrad, and high) and two 'movings' plus a few other significant things over the next 6 weeks or so. :) :) So, I'll be touching in once in a while, but I cannot promise much! :) :) You take care out there and keep in touch! :) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Maria Jose Garcia
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I love this sentence: the usual Kato enthusiasm evident in all of his actions.

This comment about the beds is also very funny: "But he cannot drive yet, and these beds will only encourage strange dreams."

The names you use are very interesting and original.

Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
    Thank you for your review, Maria -- have a wonderful day! :)
Comment from susand3022
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Did you do this for me??? I wasn't expecting to see your name up on my message board my Lovely Busy Lady of the South with the Grand Family... wow... your title just grew exponentially! LOL I love this story and I love you for putting up a chapter for me!!! Now, get back to your busy life young lady! I'll see you when I see you... then you can put up a chapter every other day! :) :) :)

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
    Nah -- you have no idea how much I miss my writing... I might have to start getting 'choosy' on my reviews or limit my time or something (at least til summer) because I never want any of this to become a 'chore'... but with life getting crowded, I'm starting to feel like that sometimes... The mad tornado of 'end of year' begins this coming weekend when we travel to watch my middles son's thesis defense ... then the youngest's grad banquet plus his first art show of the year ... then the oldest's law school grad ... then we gotta 'move' the older ones.... UGH!! CRAZINESS!! :) :) I've got the one part of the next chapter that I will post either today or tomorrow after work... then it might be IT til the end of May! :( :( Little things here and keeping in touch with you and few others, but.... like I said, lurking in the shadows.. :) :) LOL! :) Take care up there, Beautiful Friend! :) Yvette :)
reply by susand3022 on 17-Apr-2019
    Will do, and like I said... good luck with such an itinerary!!! Have a little fun and don't forget to take lots of pictures! You know there will be summer poetry about it all! :)
Comment from lyenochka
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Ah, the earlier characters will join with these characters soon. I like the sense of excitement and anticipation that Kato has with Addy coming to live with them.

I don't know if these characters were always there or not:
"Image of √????√???√??√?¬¢??Delightful Southern House Plans√????√???√??√?¬¢?? "

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
    Thanx for stopping by on this one, Helen -- I did go in and remove that graffiti -- you know, that little gnome adds more EVERY TIME you open an edit and re-save! :) :) So glad you caught that before it even got more out of control!! :) :) Take care and have a great remainder of the week! :) Yvette
Comment from Ms. Snyder
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Hi Yvette, Like in GOT (Game of Thrones) "Winter is coming" their catchphrase you could steal it and make it the ominous "Summer is coming" LOL Okay MRW and CQ - you have given me big smiles and laughs just before bed - it was the perfect size chapter before I am heading off to la-la land - yes I love my Kato!!! I have adored him (the character has been my favorite) from the very beginning! Okay I will look for the next one, but I have one to post too - so maybe we will get them out around the same time. Let us hope and Beautiful Teacher I know you are swamped! I realize this is going to be one of the busiest times of any of the year ends for you - so if you get it out or if you don't I am not going to bug you because this is going to be a time for you to just take in and enjoy!! So no pressure from me. I really enjoyed this chapter! Cheers, Fonda

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this short one -- the next one (much longer) may be my last until toward the end of May -- life's about to get insane in my world (see other review) so, Maggie's story will have to be completely developed in my blonde brain and I'll 'spit it all out' come June! :) ;) Take care! :) Yvette