That Passion Fruit
Sweet, sexy, and sensational passion.11 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, That Passion Fruit, has the proper syllable set up and acts as a love letter to someone who makes two people a couple in love. Nice.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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This 3-5-3, That Passion Fruit, has the proper syllable set up and acts as a love letter to someone who makes two people a couple in love. Nice.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thank you Bill. Not many read it cause of the warning. "Beware luscious lady on site." :)
Comment from l.raven
when love it true love...it is eternal...
and as we grow....so does that love...and our souls
join together as one...very well written...stunning
picture...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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when love it true love...it is eternal...
and as we grow....so does that love...and our souls
join together as one...very well written...stunning
picture...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you Linda. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Dean Kuch
At least it's love sparking your desires instead of raw lust.
Some can't distinguish between lust and love saying they are one and the same, but there IS a BIG difference.
Lust is selfish, wanting only one thing whereas love encompasses all.
Nice 3-5-3 entry for the contest.
Best of luck to you.
~Dean
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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At least it's love sparking your desires instead of raw lust.
Some can't distinguish between lust and love saying they are one and the same, but there IS a BIG difference.
Lust is selfish, wanting only one thing whereas love encompasses all.
Nice 3-5-3 entry for the contest.
Best of luck to you.
~Dean
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you Dean. I'm glad you, as a poet, understand. I'm glad you liked it.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Bicpen
Good it has an appeal with desire as the selected attribute to challenge the word passion why not lust or even madness? Passion is a strange things that lights a desire though this one is for completeness and harmony with just one lover why not more ?
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Good it has an appeal with desire as the selected attribute to challenge the word passion why not lust or even madness? Passion is a strange things that lights a desire though this one is for completeness and harmony with just one lover why not more ?
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Why not more? Well, if more, then it would be LUST. :)
Comment from Khurram1
A well measured poem and a great contest entry it is! But I'm afraid I couldn't really get the meaning of the last line. "Our soul one" can you please enlighten?
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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A well measured poem and a great contest entry it is! But I'm afraid I couldn't really get the meaning of the last line. "Our soul one" can you please enlighten?
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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There should be a coma after soul that way two people become one. My error.
Comment from LisaMay
Marking is as containing sexual content may put some readers off. It is totally innocuous and if anyone got offended if it didn't have a warning well, what sheltered boring lives they must lead. True love SHOULD spark desire, and what a lovely thing it is when together your souls are one.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Marking is as containing sexual content may put some readers off. It is totally innocuous and if anyone got offended if it didn't have a warning well, what sheltered boring lives they must lead. True love SHOULD spark desire, and what a lovely thing it is when together your souls are one.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you Lisa May. It didn't have a sexual content label, but we have many very religious members that would be offended by a beautiful flower. I placed it to see if true poets would read maybe it was a mistake, but... I've been known to make many. :)
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Isn't it intriguing what folks get offended by! If religion gets in the way of appreciating beauty, then I think they are seriously misinterpreting religion.
Keep on making those mistakes... it's where poetry lies.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very passionate offering for a passion contest ... your image certainly adds to your mood here. I would suggest, perhaps, adding a comma after the word souls in your last line. :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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A very passionate offering for a passion contest ... your image certainly adds to your mood here. I would suggest, perhaps, adding a comma after the word souls in your last line. :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you Yvette, for reading and pointing out that. :)
Comment from Earl Corp
Did you put the sexual content warning on for the poem's picture? Because your words were not sexual in nature at all. I wish you Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Did you put the sexual content warning on for the poem's picture? Because your words were not sexual in nature at all. I wish you Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Yes Earl, for the picture, we have many members that take offend because of a beautiful flower. :)
Comment from James Upshaw
Great 3-5-3 poem. It is very simple, which is a good thing. I definitely felt the passionate emotion. I like the idea of two souls becoming one. That is a great way of describing it.
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Great 3-5-3 poem. It is very simple, which is a good thing. I definitely felt the passionate emotion. I like the idea of two souls becoming one. That is a great way of describing it.
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you James.
Comment from Mark D. R.
This 3-5-3 verse drips with sensuality. Your picture just enhances that feeling.
I would have liked to see your text in some red color, which would heighten IMHO your overall presentation.
Best wishes for your entry.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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This 3-5-3 verse drips with sensuality. Your picture just enhances that feeling.
I would have liked to see your text in some red color, which would heighten IMHO your overall presentation.
Best wishes for your entry.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you Mark. You know... you are right. :)
