Desire out of Control
Wanting to kiss a desirable woman5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Desire Out of Control, has the proper syllable set up and finds two lovers wanting what's next, and tired of waiting.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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This 3-5-3, Desire Out of Control, has the proper syllable set up and finds two lovers wanting what's next, and tired of waiting.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the read and the comment.
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Well written poem with great complimentary artwork about passion. Lusting is a great passion. No edits or adjustments necessary. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Well written poem with great complimentary artwork about passion. Lusting is a great passion. No edits or adjustments necessary. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the read and the comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow -- is it getting a little warm in here... LOL! :) :) A really hot offering for the contest! ;); ) Thanx for sharing that 'passion' and best of luck a the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Wow -- is it getting a little warm in here... LOL! :) :) A really hot offering for the contest! ;); ) Thanx for sharing that 'passion' and best of luck a the polls! ;)
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the read and the comments. Much appreciated. You may wish to open a window or take a cool drink.
Comment from victor 66
There are a number of definitions for PASSION:
1. any powerful or compelling emotion or feeling, as love or hate.
2. strong amorous feeling or desire; love; ardor.
3. strong sexual desire; lust.
4. an instance or experience of strong love or sexual desire.
5. a person toward whom one feels strong love or sexual desire.
6. a strong or extravagant fondness, enthusiasm, or desire for anything:
I believe passion has to do with the truth inside of you.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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There are a number of definitions for PASSION:
1. any powerful or compelling emotion or feeling, as love or hate.
2. strong amorous feeling or desire; love; ardor.
3. strong sexual desire; lust.
4. an instance or experience of strong love or sexual desire.
5. a person toward whom one feels strong love or sexual desire.
6. a strong or extravagant fondness, enthusiasm, or desire for anything:
I believe passion has to do with the truth inside of you.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Yes, I agree. Passion is like a box of chocolates to paraphrase one Forest Gump. It comes in many forms, passion for one is not for all.
Thanks for the read and the comments.
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You bet.
Comment from susand3022
Ooh, la, la, Author!!! That's one steamy poem, and one steamy painting to go with it! sweet... cherry lips indeed... ;) I thought I was going to have to turn on the fan in here to keep the windows clear... ;) lol Good luck with the contest!!! :)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Ooh, la, la, Author!!! That's one steamy poem, and one steamy painting to go with it! sweet... cherry lips indeed... ;) I thought I was going to have to turn on the fan in here to keep the windows clear... ;) lol Good luck with the contest!!! :)
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Heavy breathing is good for the soul, I would opine. Thanks for the read and the comments now take deep breaths and slow your breathing.
