NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Jaunt of the Day"A poem a day - April 2019
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Comment from JudyE
It's possible to have fun without any sunshine, as you say, but fun in the sun is preferable, isn't it? You're past the halfway mark with these now, aren't you?
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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It's possible to have fun without any sunshine, as you say, but fun in the sun is preferable, isn't it? You're past the halfway mark with these now, aren't you?
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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'Yay' for reaching the half way milestone!
Thanks for your feedback, Judy :) Much appreciated! Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Heather Knight
Funny, we also went for a picnic today. But the weather was better over here.
I have to give you a six. All your poems make me smile and sometimes even laugh.
Only 15 to go, girl.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Funny, we also went for a picnic today. But the weather was better over here.
I have to give you a six. All your poems make me smile and sometimes even laugh.
Only 15 to go, girl.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Hi Maria :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and generous 6 star rating. I really appreciate it!
I'm glad that my poems make you smile....that makes me smile!
Best wishes, Debra :)
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Just reviewed another one. Loved it too.
Comment from papa55mike
Sometimes you have to tough it out to have a blast with the family. This is very well-written and I love the picture. I've read several of these entries lately, and I really like this one.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Sometimes you have to tough it out to have a blast with the family. This is very well-written and I love the picture. I've read several of these entries lately, and I really like this one.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much, Mike, for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it! Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from susand3022
Hi Debra, Isn't this like something that happens to so many of us so much of the time... best-laid plans!!! I love this poem, it's light and breezy and fun. :)
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Hi Debra, Isn't this like something that happens to so many of us so much of the time... best-laid plans!!! I love this poem, it's light and breezy and fun. :)
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much, Susan, for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it! Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Tina Crute
This is great and the poem's reading seemed like a happy little jaunt, as the rhythm carried me to each line. This was enjoyable to read, and the artwork was perfectly suited to the poem, as it showed a dirt road to a fun day:)
Tina
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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This is great and the poem's reading seemed like a happy little jaunt, as the rhythm carried me to each line. This was enjoyable to read, and the artwork was perfectly suited to the poem, as it showed a dirt road to a fun day:)
Tina
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much, Tina, for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it! Best wishes, Debra :)
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You are entirely welcome!
Keep up the good work!
Tina
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is why I love children (and fun moms like you): The Undeterred Spirit!! Weather schmeather! They can ALWAYS find a way to enjoy themselves! I'm glad you had a nice picnic, and it made for (yet another) terrific poem. I feel like I'm getting to vicariously enjoy your vacation week! xo
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This is why I love children (and fun moms like you): The Undeterred Spirit!! Weather schmeather! They can ALWAYS find a way to enjoy themselves! I'm glad you had a nice picnic, and it made for (yet another) terrific poem. I feel like I'm getting to vicariously enjoy your vacation week! xo
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Hi Rachelle :) Thank you for your lovely feedback.
You always make me smile with your warm words...
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from 24chas
I liked this write, Debra. Sounds like a fun day, even if it was a little cold. It's funny to read that because it's warming up here. Nice job and keep up the good work.
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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I liked this write, Debra. Sounds like a fun day, even if it was a little cold. It's funny to read that because it's warming up here. Nice job and keep up the good work.
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Chas :) It's a little warmer here today too - hurrah!
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
