Tiny Seed Blossoms In Time
In time setting a tiny goal can become achievable.4 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
When I first started posting on Fanstory I was told to double space between paragraphs to make it easier for reviewers to read. If you're doing Acrostic you might think about bolding the first words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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When I first started posting on Fanstory I was told to double space between paragraphs to make it easier for reviewers to read. If you're doing Acrostic you might think about bolding the first words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much for the suggestion and review.
Kind regards.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good write and I can appreciate your words. I like the way you used each letter to qualify this for the contest. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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This was a good write and I can appreciate your words. I like the way you used each letter to qualify this for the contest. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much for your kind review.
Have a wonderful Tuesday.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Hello, Anon! :) This is actually a pretty interesting read, but I would suggest a few things:
first, pop back in and enlarge the font, it is VERY difficult to read with so many tiny words all together.
second, since this is an acrostic story (and you followed that - I read it!!), I would suggest editing it to have a 'carriage return' at the end of each sentence so that it is MUCH easier to discern the fact that you do, indeed, go from A-Z as the rules instruct.
Doing both of these things will assure you more true ratings from folks stopping to 'take a read' and give you a better opportunity at the polls because it will be easier on your voters' eyes (otherwise, they will simply click to the next entry). :) :)
This is a wonderful offering -- just want to be sure you get the credit you deserve. Take care! :)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Hello, Anon! :) This is actually a pretty interesting read, but I would suggest a few things:
first, pop back in and enlarge the font, it is VERY difficult to read with so many tiny words all together.
second, since this is an acrostic story (and you followed that - I read it!!), I would suggest editing it to have a 'carriage return' at the end of each sentence so that it is MUCH easier to discern the fact that you do, indeed, go from A-Z as the rules instruct.
Doing both of these things will assure you more true ratings from folks stopping to 'take a read' and give you a better opportunity at the polls because it will be easier on your voters' eyes (otherwise, they will simply click to the next entry). :) :)
This is a wonderful offering -- just want to be sure you get the credit you deserve. Take care! :)
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review and advice. I truly appreciate it. I will do as you suggested.
Kind regards.
I wanted to nominate you for your review and suggestions but the nomination page someone changed on me. So sorry.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
This is a very well written and interesting acrostic story you have penned for the contest, my friend. Nothing amiss for me to suggest revisions. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
This is a very well written and interesting acrostic story you have penned for the contest, my friend. Nothing amiss for me to suggest revisions. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the wonderful review and good wishes. I so appreciate it.
Have a wonderful week.
