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A Fluffy Past.

To Brooke. Even though I never met her.

19 total reviews 
Comment from robyn corum
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MJ,

This is a cute little story, but what is a dandelion clock? Other than that, I thought this was adorable!

You asked about my adding this to the book - I only did that for those folks who didn't know there WAS a book. *smile* If we have any others pop up, I'll add them all together.

Thank you!

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    This is a dandelion clock:https://www.google.com/search?q=dandelion+clock&client=safari&rls=en&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjy2vvR0dLhAhWyxoUKHZMiBeYQ_AUIDigB&biw=1440&bih=768. What do you call it?
reply by robyn corum on 15-Apr-2019
    hahaha! It's just a dandelion. But I saw that the clock thing is British. And stems from 'A children's amusement in which the number of puffs needed to blow the filamentous achenes from a dandelion is supposed to tell the time.' Very cool. Never heard of that before. Thanks!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    I've just seen it can also be called a blowball. For me a dandelion is the yellow flower.
Comment from aryr
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A great story Maria, I really enjoyed reading this, it was great, it was fantastic. I liked the magik in her grandma's hair. And the story behind it was fun to read. You did very well with this.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Thanks for reading, Aryr.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Okay, that's such a precious little story that I cannot imagine anything that would have been more welcome to start off a Monday morning!! :) ;) Can just picture that little angel being convinced of grandma's story!! :) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Thank YOU for reading, Yvette.
Comment from Sugarray77
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This is a very charming story, Maria... You do come up with some fantastic tales with adorable characters. I enjoyed this 'puffy' little snippet of a story.

Melissa

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Thanks so much, Melissa. You are sweet.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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AAAWWW what a perfectly delightful writing for children and I too can imagine the little puffballs floating in the air as I am still a fan of the aged dandeliions and their parachute seeds.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Thanks for reading, Barb. Have a nice day.
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Oh, Maria!
What a perfectly delicious story! I can just see the wonder and doubt of the little girl. And when the little girl blows on the grandmother's hair = magical. Smiles all around! Lovely story!

diane

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    I'm glad you liked this, Diane. Thanks for reading and for the six stars.
Comment from royowen
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What a very cutesy story Maria. I was wondering if how many of our flowers become little girls, if so who adopted them, heh heh. Another wonderful short form story, well done, dear friend, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Thanks for your review, Roy.
reply by royowen on 15-Apr-2019
    Most welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Maria, this is so delightful! I have my grand daughter staying with me just now and I shall read this story to her at bedtime tonight, this is inventive and beautiful, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Thanks for your review, Dolly. Knowing you'll read this to your granddaughter makes me super happy.
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Maria,

Ha ha ha! This is such an endearing story. I love the ending. (Good grief, grandma was shedding! LOL) As always, your story is impeccably well written, with nothing I could possibly suggest you consider improving upon. Thank you so much for sharing yet another incredibly imaginative and delightful read. Jan :-)

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Thanks so much for reading, Jan. You are always very kind.