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A Fluffy Past.

To Brooke. Even though I never met her.

19 total reviews 
Comment from Gail Denham
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Very interesting. So she just found this out about her grandmother. Quite unusual. So I assume the granddaughter had inherited some of the same characteristics? Hmmm, have to think on this one.
Good story

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Maybe she has... she'll have to wait for her hair to turn white to find out...
    Thanks for reading.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
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This is an imaginative and enjoyable story, but I am confused about one thing--why is she a dandelion "clock"? In what way is she a clock?
Other than this, I find the story great, a good read for children.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Dandelion clock is the word used in England to refer to the fluffy white ball children like to blow on.
    Thanks for reading.
reply by brenda faye curtis on 16-Apr-2019
    Oh, okay! I've learned something today!
Comment from Dean Kuch
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That would pretty much seal the deal and be proof positive for me.
Brooke Baldwin would have loved reading this story.
Every time I see a dandelion or hear stories and poetry about them I can't help but think of our adewpearl.
Nice story, as usual, Maria.
~Dean

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thanks for your review, Dean.
Comment from Gloria ....
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This is just terrific, Maria. So imaginative, a dandelion clock and Grandmother's bob blowing seeds with a puff of air. I am most impressed with your originality. Works like a charm.

Excellent indeed and perfect for Brooke. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thanks so much for your kind words, Gloria.
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Maria. A super story. You have some imagination and your writing enthralls with its fantasy and uniqueness. I never know what tact you'll take when I start to read one. Marilyn

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thanks for reading, Marilyn. XXX
Comment from Louise Michelle
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I love it! Didn't know where you were going with this one, but that magical ending gets me every time! Yes, those poor dandelions get a bad rap, but Brooke knew better. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Thanks for another lovely review, Lou.
Comment from 24chas
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This was such a beautiful story, Maria. I love how you are so creative and imaginative with your stories. I'm 53 and I look forward to these like a child. Good job.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    We are more or less the same age then. I'm fifty-four... going on five.
    Thanks for reading.
reply by 24chas on 15-Apr-2019
    I'll be 54 in two months.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Fifty-five in September... Time flies. I can't believe I'm this old. I still feel super young.
reply by 24chas on 15-Apr-2019
    Me, too, most days. :)
Comment from Judy Swanson
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A delightful little story, memorable, from a grandmother to a grandchild's ears. I had never heard the term "dandelion clock" before so had to look it up. I can see it so clearly now, in the artwork you choose, and in the seemingly millions of delicate dandelion fluffs the disburse the seeds far and wide to new adventures. I enjoyed reading this - and learning something.

Judy

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Thanks for reading, Judy. It seems it's an English word...
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written story about a grandmother who was a dandelion before she became a little girl and later on a grandmother, the unbelievable story is proved to be true.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Thanks for your constant support of my work.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Maria Jose. This is a delightful little story, and a lovely addition to Robyn's book dedicated to Brooke. Just one thing. What is a dandelion clock? Warm regards. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Thanks for reading, Ulla.
    This is a dandelion clock:https://www.google.com/search?q=dandelion+clock&client=safari&rls=en&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjy2vvR0dLhAhWyxoUKHZMiBeYQ_AUIDigB&biw=1440&bih=768
    What do you call it?
reply by Ulla on 15-Apr-2019
    I've no idea.Your answer came back with some lenghty Internet connections. I'm totally in the dark. I'm sorry. :)))
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    It's also called blowball. If you look at the picture that comes with my story, you'll see some dandelion clocks. They are the fluffy white things children like to blow on.
reply by Ulla on 15-Apr-2019
    Awe, I've learned something new.I didn't know they were called that. :)))