A Fluffy Past.
To Brooke. Even though I never met her.19 total reviews
Comment from Gail Denham
Very interesting. So she just found this out about her grandmother. Quite unusual. So I assume the granddaughter had inherited some of the same characteristics? Hmmm, have to think on this one.
Good story
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
Very interesting. So she just found this out about her grandmother. Quite unusual. So I assume the granddaughter had inherited some of the same characteristics? Hmmm, have to think on this one.
Good story
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Maybe she has... she'll have to wait for her hair to turn white to find out...
Thanks for reading.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
This is an imaginative and enjoyable story, but I am confused about one thing--why is she a dandelion "clock"? In what way is she a clock?
Other than this, I find the story great, a good read for children.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
This is an imaginative and enjoyable story, but I am confused about one thing--why is she a dandelion "clock"? In what way is she a clock?
Other than this, I find the story great, a good read for children.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Dandelion clock is the word used in England to refer to the fluffy white ball children like to blow on.
Thanks for reading.
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Oh, okay! I've learned something today!
Comment from Dean Kuch
That would pretty much seal the deal and be proof positive for me.
Brooke Baldwin would have loved reading this story.
Every time I see a dandelion or hear stories and poetry about them I can't help but think of our adewpearl.
Nice story, as usual, Maria.
~Dean
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
That would pretty much seal the deal and be proof positive for me.
Brooke Baldwin would have loved reading this story.
Every time I see a dandelion or hear stories and poetry about them I can't help but think of our adewpearl.
Nice story, as usual, Maria.
~Dean
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thanks for your review, Dean.
Comment from Gloria ....
This is just terrific, Maria. So imaginative, a dandelion clock and Grandmother's bob blowing seeds with a puff of air. I am most impressed with your originality. Works like a charm.
Excellent indeed and perfect for Brooke. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
This is just terrific, Maria. So imaginative, a dandelion clock and Grandmother's bob blowing seeds with a puff of air. I am most impressed with your originality. Works like a charm.
Excellent indeed and perfect for Brooke. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much for your kind words, Gloria.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Maria. A super story. You have some imagination and your writing enthralls with its fantasy and uniqueness. I never know what tact you'll take when I start to read one. Marilyn
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
Hi Maria. A super story. You have some imagination and your writing enthralls with its fantasy and uniqueness. I never know what tact you'll take when I start to read one. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thanks for reading, Marilyn. XXX
Comment from Louise Michelle
I love it! Didn't know where you were going with this one, but that magical ending gets me every time! Yes, those poor dandelions get a bad rap, but Brooke knew better. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
I love it! Didn't know where you were going with this one, but that magical ending gets me every time! Yes, those poor dandelions get a bad rap, but Brooke knew better. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thanks for another lovely review, Lou.
Comment from 24chas
This was such a beautiful story, Maria. I love how you are so creative and imaginative with your stories. I'm 53 and I look forward to these like a child. Good job.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
This was such a beautiful story, Maria. I love how you are so creative and imaginative with your stories. I'm 53 and I look forward to these like a child. Good job.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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We are more or less the same age then. I'm fifty-four... going on five.
Thanks for reading.
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I'll be 54 in two months.
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Fifty-five in September... Time flies. I can't believe I'm this old. I still feel super young.
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Me, too, most days. :)
Comment from Judy Swanson
A delightful little story, memorable, from a grandmother to a grandchild's ears. I had never heard the term "dandelion clock" before so had to look it up. I can see it so clearly now, in the artwork you choose, and in the seemingly millions of delicate dandelion fluffs the disburse the seeds far and wide to new adventures. I enjoyed reading this - and learning something.
Judy
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
A delightful little story, memorable, from a grandmother to a grandchild's ears. I had never heard the term "dandelion clock" before so had to look it up. I can see it so clearly now, in the artwork you choose, and in the seemingly millions of delicate dandelion fluffs the disburse the seeds far and wide to new adventures. I enjoyed reading this - and learning something.
Judy
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thanks for reading, Judy. It seems it's an English word...
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story about a grandmother who was a dandelion before she became a little girl and later on a grandmother, the unbelievable story is proved to be true.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
A very well-written story about a grandmother who was a dandelion before she became a little girl and later on a grandmother, the unbelievable story is proved to be true.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thanks for your constant support of my work.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Maria Jose. This is a delightful little story, and a lovely addition to Robyn's book dedicated to Brooke. Just one thing. What is a dandelion clock? Warm regards. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
Hi Maria Jose. This is a delightful little story, and a lovely addition to Robyn's book dedicated to Brooke. Just one thing. What is a dandelion clock? Warm regards. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thanks for reading, Ulla.
This is a dandelion clock:https://www.google.com/search?q=dandelion+clock&client=safari&rls=en&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjy2vvR0dLhAhWyxoUKHZMiBeYQ_AUIDigB&biw=1440&bih=768
What do you call it?
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I've no idea.Your answer came back with some lenghty Internet connections. I'm totally in the dark. I'm sorry. :)))
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It's also called blowball. If you look at the picture that comes with my story, you'll see some dandelion clocks. They are the fluffy white things children like to blow on.
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Awe, I've learned something new.I didn't know they were called that. :)))