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A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.

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Comment from Earl Corp
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I'm not sure why you did a September poem in April, but it seems to work well. Kind of a Lest We Forget message to your piece of work. Very nice job.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
    Well I always loved that song see You in September thanks for reviewing dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A poignant memory that we should never forget ... and that there are still families touched by this attack so many years ago. Thank you for sharing your memorial for them! :)

who Aretha in Heaven --> who Art in Heaven

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
    Thanks dear.
    Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from Janilou
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Our father who Aretha in Heaven...
"Now we say Thy Name. .
"In Kingdom Come...
"Our Work be done..
...

I am not understanding the "Aretha" part. Would you be so kind as to explain the meaning? Thank you. :-)

It is hard for me to believe that after 9-11, we so quickly reverted back to our old ways.

It was an interesting read.
All the best,
Jan

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
    Areth
    Are
    Old English
    Biblical
    Ricky
reply by Janilou on 19-Apr-2019
    Thank you! :-)