Nature Beats Humans
Nature takes over humanity.28 total reviews
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Raul. I think you've got the basis for a new story I think would be very interesting to read. The artwork is really cool. Good job.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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This was a good read, Raul. I think you've got the basis for a new story I think would be very interesting to read. The artwork is really cool. Good job.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you! I am so happy that you enjoyed my story! :)
Comment from moongirlwriter
That would be a horror. . . a horror fantasy? If you listen closely though when walking in the forest, I swear the trees are talking. Not so sure how I feel about this artwork, maybe it does work with horror. :) Good luck.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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That would be a horror. . . a horror fantasy? If you listen closely though when walking in the forest, I swear the trees are talking. Not so sure how I feel about this artwork, maybe it does work with horror. :) Good luck.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you!
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Comment from WryWriter
LOL! I bet they spit us all out from indigestion. For your next one, make it the insects who have mutated from all the pesticides sprayed to kill them off. LOL! Great artwork choice for this theme. I have to vote for the plants and trees we have abused.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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LOL! I bet they spit us all out from indigestion. For your next one, make it the insects who have mutated from all the pesticides sprayed to kill them off. LOL! Great artwork choice for this theme. I have to vote for the plants and trees we have abused.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you! Excellent creative choice for a story idea. Yeah, I think that insects are there to bug us. But, good choice. Thanks again! :)
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Contains the appropriate number of words as required by this contest. Would be a scary thought for nature to eat all of mankind, wouldn't it? Suppose that would be the end of humanity as it is known. Verb tense issues throughout though. Because this is a contest entry, you may desire to reconsider that.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Contains the appropriate number of words as required by this contest. Would be a scary thought for nature to eat all of mankind, wouldn't it? Suppose that would be the end of humanity as it is known. Verb tense issues throughout though. Because this is a contest entry, you may desire to reconsider that.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you. I will follow your advice.
Comment from Ben Colder
I interesting entry for the contest. I was thinking about a documentation about a person who was becoming a tree somewhere in the Islands. Really, Strange but true.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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I interesting entry for the contest. I was thinking about a documentation about a person who was becoming a tree somewhere in the Islands. Really, Strange but true.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Interesting idea you have there. Thanks! I am happy that you enjoyed my story.
Comment from tfawcus
Some truth in this disturbing story. We are eventually composted for the nourishment of plants if we're not first torn apart by jackals! Have you been watching a rerun of Day of the Triffids recently? LOL
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Some truth in this disturbing story. We are eventually composted for the nourishment of plants if we're not first torn apart by jackals! Have you been watching a rerun of Day of the Triffids recently? LOL
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
It is definitely an interesting premise for a fictional write, but I find the switching between verb tenses a bit difficult to follow... I guess my only question about the story is that you've alluded to the fact that only plants and trees make up nature? Best of luck to you in the contest! :)
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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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It is definitely an interesting premise for a fictional write, but I find the switching between verb tenses a bit difficult to follow... I guess my only question about the story is that you've alluded to the fact that only plants and trees make up nature? Best of luck to you in the contest! :)
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from humpwhistle
I did enjoy you story. And one day, it may come true.
Frankly, flora owes we humans a lot of payback.
Given the state of our ecological crisis,
flora ought to be the stewards of this planet.
Thanks for the story.
Peace, Lee
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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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I did enjoy you story. And one day, it may come true.
Frankly, flora owes we humans a lot of payback.
Given the state of our ecological crisis,
flora ought to be the stewards of this planet.
Thanks for the story.
Peace, Lee
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Thank you! I am so happy you enjoyed it. You're welcome! :)
