Comment from ngage

Excellent

Another captivating chapter, Ms. Shana.
So it looks like your two detectives are on the case to investigate the cemetery attack.
Your creature you've created is very mysterious. It resembles Dracula but has the ability to shift into a werewolf creature that seems to have cunning skills.
I'm interested in reading where you take this, especially with the angels involved.
Keep up the great writing!

Nate

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019

Thank you, Nate! :)
Glad you enjoyed this one. I'm having fun writing scenes for the two detectives. They have their hands full in this series. The battle angels will play a big part in the story as well, so stay tuned for lots of action.
Thanks for your support my friend!

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

A great episode about regurgitating the events at the cemetary where two young people were brutalised by some creature, possibly a werewolf, and Ms. McCain being bitten by the creature, and falling into an open, and Carla Rosi's body mysteriously appearing at the cemetary. Fantastic fact laying episode, establishing and ratifying the plot. The collation gives a perfect foundation for this fabulous story Shana, excellent job, blessings, Roy
Typo : "(Well) do, Captain." Will?

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019

Thank you, Roy! :)

Glad you enjoyed the scene between Detective Sanchez and his captain recaping the brutal deaths at the cemetery. And thanks for catching my typo. Can't believe I overlooked that. Lol!
Stay tuned... more to come.
I am taking a little break this week at a relaxing camping trip. Hopefully it will inspire some writing.
Thanks again!

Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 15-Apr-2019

You deserve the recast sweet girl.

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

They think the poor lady is delusional. Hearing a story like that, I guess I would too. It's very well-written, interesting start to finish. Your characters, dialogue and their actions seem real.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019

Thank you, Misty :)

I'm glad you enjoyed this one too.
I do love to create a good mystery. Now my two detectives have their hands full solving this crime. Stay tuned... more to come.

Thanks again,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

Another extremely interesting chapter! I know something is about to happen, but you've got me on pins and needles as to what. I like the way you've set it up as to the finding out of some questions being answered for Manuel. Looking forward to the next chapter and discovering what you have in store.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019

Thank you, Faye :)

I really enjoy a good mystery and this is going to be fun creating. I think my two detectives will have their hands full trying to solve this one.

Thanks for all your support. I enjoy reading your feedback.

Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 15-Apr-2019

I would heartily agree! I look forward to finding out how they will handle it.