Rosie Raintree
Road to riches...11 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
I loved your tale, and the fact you did it all in rhyme was amazing. That illustration was so good! It always amazed me that when a man is privileged to have a woman's love, that he would seek the love of others. But, that alone has kept writers going for untold years. I hope to read all your writings, but also hope you will try your hand at more westerns.
Also, sorry for my lack of sixes. They come out on Sundays.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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I loved your tale, and the fact you did it all in rhyme was amazing. That illustration was so good! It always amazed me that when a man is privileged to have a woman's love, that he would seek the love of others. But, that alone has kept writers going for untold years. I hope to read all your writings, but also hope you will try your hand at more westerns.
Also, sorry for my lack of sixes. They come out on Sundays.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review.❤️
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My distinct pleasure!🎶
Comment from royowen
I never did cheat at cards, but because I played some bridge, and solo whist, I could read the cards, so one didn't have to cheat, a beautifully written flash fiction my friend, you cleverly rhymed but it looked like prose, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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I never did cheat at cards, but because I played some bridge, and solo whist, I could read the cards, so one didn't have to cheat, a beautifully written flash fiction my friend, you cleverly rhymed but it looked like prose, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you for this great review. :)
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Most welcome
Comment from Barry Penfold
A bloody good write and fits all the requirements of the contest. Just loved the flow of the story and totally believable and entertaining. A winner for sure. Thanks for sharing and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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A bloody good write and fits all the requirements of the contest. Just loved the flow of the story and totally believable and entertaining. A winner for sure. Thanks for sharing and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thanks for this nice review. I didn't win, but it was fun writing it. :)
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Not to worry. It was a bloody good read.
Comment from Paul McFarland
That story flows very nicely, Boogie. I didn't even know it rhymed until I read the prompt. You incorporated the rhyme so well that only the story was on my mind.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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That story flows very nicely, Boogie. I didn't even know it rhymed until I read the prompt. You incorporated the rhyme so well that only the story was on my mind.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem. I was looking through my profile the other day and came across it so I thought I'd repost it. Thanks again. :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Road to riches is a good story with a great lesson and moral, never cheat on women, there is no question of fear; I like the twist and the beginning, interesting middle and end; there is a nice rhyme in the development; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Road to riches is a good story with a great lesson and moral, never cheat on women, there is no question of fear; I like the twist and the beginning, interesting middle and end; there is a nice rhyme in the development; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for this thoughtful review, it's always appreciated. :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Great work with the prompt. Your story read smoothly with great rhymes and imagery. Rosie was probably one of many in the Old West. I did not see the ending coming. That was a surprise. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Great work with the prompt. Your story read smoothly with great rhymes and imagery. Rosie was probably one of many in the Old West. I did not see the ending coming. That was a surprise. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you for this nice review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Earl Corp
A very good original entry to the western poem contest. Your creativity really shined through and I enjoyed this poem immensely. It rhymed, made sense, and it entertained me. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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A very good original entry to the western poem contest. Your creativity really shined through and I enjoyed this poem immensely. It rhymed, made sense, and it entertained me. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. I appreciate you taking time to read my rhyming story. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
Wow!! What a story! I couldn't stop reading! What will rosie be up to next! I have to have a part two! Excellent poem :) good luck in your contest! You have my vote!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Wow!! What a story! I couldn't stop reading! What will rosie be up to next! I have to have a part two! Excellent poem :) good luck in your contest! You have my vote!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Thank you wonderful poet. That means a lot coming from such a talented person.
Comment from Bill Pinder
That is a well done poem about a woman who is gifted in the art of cheating. Too bad her husband wasn't gifted in getting away with it. Thanks for sharing.
Bill
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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That is a well done poem about a woman who is gifted in the art of cheating. Too bad her husband wasn't gifted in getting away with it. Thanks for sharing.
Bill
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Hahaha! Exactly! Thanks for reading and for this great review.
Comment from Sandra Montanino
What a really fun story you've told. You captured my interest from the start and you just kept it going. Rosie was no fool, couldn't be tricked by Jim. Good job.
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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What a really fun story you've told. You captured my interest from the start and you just kept it going. Rosie was no fool, couldn't be tricked by Jim. Good job.
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Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Thank you for this nice review and for taking time to read my poem. :)
