NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Hiding"A poem a day - April 2019
12 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
A well written Whitney poem for your little lass. It takes a while before kids find themselves in life. Sometimes shyness is camouflaged by bravado. Sooner or later, the real personality bubbles up.Marilyn
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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A well written Whitney poem for your little lass. It takes a while before kids find themselves in life. Sometimes shyness is camouflaged by bravado. Sooner or later, the real personality bubbles up.Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Hi Marilyn :)
Thank you for your lovely feedback... I appreciate it as always.
I hope Rebecca finds confidence to be herself soon - her bravado is more than a little spiky at times, bless her!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Sally Law
This is fresh and fun and you have your own little lass as the example. I admire your Whitney a day and see you never boring. Keeping em coming!
All my best,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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This is fresh and fun and you have your own little lass as the example. I admire your Whitney a day and see you never boring. Keeping em coming!
All my best,
Sal xo
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much for your warm and encouragement, Sal :) Best wishes, Debra xx
Comment from Heather Knight
How very cute! The way you write cracks me up. Is one of your daughters really like this: shy but pretending to be tough?
Love the artwork as well.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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How very cute! The way you write cracks me up. Is one of your daughters really like this: shy but pretending to be tough?
Love the artwork as well.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Hi Maria :)
Yep, Rebecca is very much like that! She's my soft little tough nut!!
Thanks for your feedback, I love that you get a chuckle out of my writing :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from JudyE
There are dozens of children (and adults) who hide their shyness behind a gruff exterior. It's always worth persevering with trying to connect with these people. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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There are dozens of children (and adults) who hide their shyness behind a gruff exterior. It's always worth persevering with trying to connect with these people. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your feedback, Judy. Best wishes as always, Debra :)
Comment from 24chas
This was great, Debra. A strong female badass with a shy heart. Gotta love it. So which gene did you give her? You're doing well with these. Good job.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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This was great, Debra. A strong female badass with a shy heart. Gotta love it. So which gene did you give her? You're doing well with these. Good job.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Hi Chas :) She got her shyness from me....the bad-ass too probably LOL! She's her mothers daughter, what can I say?!
Thanks for the feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Excellent Whitney and I do know a few like this and I still wonder what became of them. I know they were survivors and they taught me a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Excellent Whitney and I do know a few like this and I still wonder what became of them. I know they were survivors and they taught me a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your feedback, Barb :) Always appreciated :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Sandra Montanino
A very cute poem. All kids are nice as pie down deep. Just some are afraid to show it, like in your poem. Good job whether this is for a contest or not.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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A very cute poem. All kids are nice as pie down deep. Just some are afraid to show it, like in your poem. Good job whether this is for a contest or not.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much, Sandra :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from A Little Bird
Love this adorable little poem! Thanks for educating me about Whitney poems (I'd never heard of them before.) The image you've chosen complements the piece well.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Love this adorable little poem! Thanks for educating me about Whitney poems (I'd never heard of them before.) The image you've chosen complements the piece well.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much for your feedback, Abby. I appreciate it! Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This Whitney, Hiding, has the correct format and finds you revealing a look at someone whom you know past the veneer that keeps the world at bay.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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This Whitney, Hiding, has the correct format and finds you revealing a look at someone whom you know past the veneer that keeps the world at bay.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your feedback, Bill :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Janilou
This is a cute poem. It is true some people who are shy come across as aloof or even rude because they don't know how to relate well to other people and feel so self conscious.
I found no errors. It's a delightful poem.
All the best,
Jan
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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This is a cute poem. It is true some people who are shy come across as aloof or even rude because they don't know how to relate well to other people and feel so self conscious.
I found no errors. It's a delightful poem.
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much, Jan, for your feedback. I appreciate it :) Best wishes, Debra
