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Experience God

Experience nature and escape into another demension

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Comment from Donka Kristeva
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Simple and "pinned down". Words and images convey a great message -- see God and feel His presence in the beauty of nature. Nice entry.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thank you for your kind words, yes I agree. . .works perfectly for me too. Thank you for the stars.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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what a very peaceful and serene offering for this contest -- one can almost feel the breezes. :) ;) I would suggest, perhaps, removing the comma there in the second line and removing all of your capital letters except, of course, for 'God'. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;)

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    so funny. . .ya know when I write, I don't even notice the caps. . .commas I do more so because I like to use them for emphasis sometimes. I'll take a look. Thanks for the comments.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    I like the comma but I agree with the caps. . .thank you!
Comment from Khurram1
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The poem is telling the obvious. It seems to carry a didactic purpose of preaching. Moreover, it is a haiku in form but not in essence. It needs a bit of pictorial quality to capture the mind of reader

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    So this poem does not resonate with you. You are obviously a purist when it comes to Haiku. I don't have enough experience with this format to be so restrictive.
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Moon,

This is a beautiful poem about communing with God. Nature is a great place to attain that trenscendent state for sure. Best of luck and thanks for sharing. Jan :-)

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
    I prefer nature to even being in church, especially when I'm alone. Thanks for your comment and stars.
Comment from 24chas
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This was a good write, moongirlwriter. I know a lot of people who feel the same way as you do with this beautiful poem. I guess it's the natural setting. Nice job.

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
    Thank you 24. I truly love slipping into that dimension. Thank you for all the stars and your comments.