a loving heart
A poem4 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Simple, to-the-point, wise, kind, encouraging, and beautiful to look at. You managed all these attributes in just two short stanzas! That's quite a bit of writing talent! Good luck with this entry in the contest. I really like it a lot. xo
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Simple, to-the-point, wise, kind, encouraging, and beautiful to look at. You managed all these attributes in just two short stanzas! That's quite a bit of writing talent! Good luck with this entry in the contest. I really like it a lot. xo
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the encouraging review Rachelle. I often forgive, but more for myself, then them. I hate the extra luggage and forgiving allows me to leave those bags at the curb? Cheers, j
Comment from Gypsymooncat
This is an awesome entry in the contest! Well written, flowed beautifully, and isn't full of "fluff", but rather, gets the message across about forgiveness in a quirky, light hearted way. I also loved your last line; very masterful and ends this poem perfectly. Good luck!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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This is an awesome entry in the contest! Well written, flowed beautifully, and isn't full of "fluff", but rather, gets the message across about forgiveness in a quirky, light hearted way. I also loved your last line; very masterful and ends this poem perfectly. Good luck!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the encouraging review gypsy. I always forgive, mostly for myself so I am not carrying around someone else's karma luggage, haha. Their circus, their monkeys. Have a wonderful Sunday, j
Comment from Tina Crute
This is a nice little poem that had a great quote! I like that you said it takes a loving heart to forgive, it makes no mention of the person who did harm to us. That's the way it is. We do it out of love, not because the other person has to do anything at all.
Good contest entry... I am glad I am not judging!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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This is a nice little poem that had a great quote! I like that you said it takes a loving heart to forgive, it makes no mention of the person who did harm to us. That's the way it is. We do it out of love, not because the other person has to do anything at all.
Good contest entry... I am glad I am not judging!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the insightful review. I forgive mostly for my own sense of peace. Karma has no expiry date, haha, cheers
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Welcome!
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Thanks for the insightful review. I forgive mostly for my own sense of peace. Karma has no expiry date, haha, cheers
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
This is a lovely write and a great contest entry. I really like your color svheme and the image you have displayed.
Good luck and thanks for sharing.
Jan :-)
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
This is a lovely write and a great contest entry. I really like your color svheme and the image you have displayed.
Good luck and thanks for sharing.
Jan :-)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the kind review. It was a fun write , cheers,
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Thanks for the kind review. It was a fun write , cheers,
