Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Pam, so good to see you sweet girl...smiles when I saw your name in my pm...I hope you are feeling better...

I love this picture...so many different things and ways to look at it...I enjoyed looking for all the different pictures...and I love your hummingbirds...very well written my sweet fried...and I love your picture...love your poem...and love you...xxoo

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 16-May-2019

Thank you so much, Linda for your upbeat review

reply by l.raven on 16-May-2019

your sooooo welcome Pam...love xxoo

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Hello Pam,
You've written an excellent tanka in the classic form
based on your painting.
A light, humorous touch with good imagery.
Not sure who the relentless bird tormentors are,
but I'm glad the hummingbirds escaped.
Well done
Robert

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 16-May-2019

Thank you Robert for an uplifting review

Comment from Janilou

Excellent

I love the poem and your artwork. It brought some vivid and colorful pictures into my mind. No errors found. Delightful. It was fun exploring the artwork too.
All the best,
Jan

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2019

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

A classic 5-7-5-7-7 tanka that describes your painting where you have let your imagination run riot in the cloudscape. Great fun. I hope the humour has a good effect on your convalescence.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2019

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

This was a good read, Pamusart. I really liked the imagination in the piece and the flow of it. It really enhanced your art work perfectly. I like the title The Great Escape. Good job.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2019

Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

I like your creative presentation and you enhanced it with your own artistic creations. I like seeing hummingbirds fighting for position around the feeder. They are very unique creatures. Thanks for sharing.
Bill

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2019

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Tanka and a great painting of the birds and the funny shapes in the clouds. I did not review any of your poetry lately, and wondered just this morning, where could you be. Glad to see you're back on track.

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2019

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Are those aliens in the sky Pam? He he he, I love how your mind works in these paintings! And you words ensure that all these birds are flitting around full of life, much enjoyed, I hope you are well, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2019