Baseball Season Started
just for fun63 total reviews
Comment from Tina Crute
I didn't get this at first, but re-read and got that you had terrible seats, by seeing "the wall in my sight." Thank you for a fun poem;I enjoyed it very much! This is funny because you two have different priorities...shoes or decent tickets, lol. Great conversational writing:)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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I didn't get this at first, but re-read and got that you had terrible seats, by seeing "the wall in my sight." Thank you for a fun poem;I enjoyed it very much! This is funny because you two have different priorities...shoes or decent tickets, lol. Great conversational writing:)
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Hi Tina, thank you so much for a great review my sweet friend...I am so glad you like it...smiling back at you...love xxoo
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You are welcome!:)
Comment from TPAC
A wonderful story, smooth flow throughput course read, deposited charming aspects of personal interests compelling to those similar interests. All in my opinion of this write.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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A wonderful story, smooth flow throughput course read, deposited charming aspects of personal interests compelling to those similar interests. All in my opinion of this write.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Hi TPAC, thank you so much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from damommy
I think I've had seats similar to those. That wife should have known better than to buy tickets like that. Let's hope her new shoes are sneakers. lol
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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I think I've had seats similar to those. That wife should have known better than to buy tickets like that. Let's hope her new shoes are sneakers. lol
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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HI Yvonne, LOL...I wouldn't want to be her when they got back home...thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Joan E.
Thanks for sharing your baseball fun. I enjoyed your taking on the persona of the husband and making digs at the wife. The picture really set the tone for the story, and your rhymed, rhythmic quatrains were a neat touch. Smiles and happy weekend with some baseball on television- Joan
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Thanks for sharing your baseball fun. I enjoyed your taking on the persona of the husband and making digs at the wife. The picture really set the tone for the story, and your rhymed, rhythmic quatrains were a neat touch. Smiles and happy weekend with some baseball on television- Joan
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Hi Joan, LOL...the last one I posted was for the girl...this one is for the guy...thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...and you are so very welcome...baseball is ok...but I love football...I watch the college games now...much love...Linda xxoo
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Enjoy the college football games, my friend. Hugs- Joan
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smiling big...my whole family loves football...big hugs...love xxoo
Comment from Judy Swanson
First question of all... where did you find that photo? That alone had me laughing out loud.
But then the fun rhythm, rhyme, and premise of your poem kept me grinning all of the way through. The enthusiasm of your character climbs and accelerates until the seats come in to view - and then the anger, disbelief and frustration take over - all palpably.
What a delight to read. Hope it was fiction!
Judy
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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First question of all... where did you find that photo? That alone had me laughing out loud.
But then the fun rhythm, rhyme, and premise of your poem kept me grinning all of the way through. The enthusiasm of your character climbs and accelerates until the seats come in to view - and then the anger, disbelief and frustration take over - all palpably.
What a delight to read. Hope it was fiction!
Judy
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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HI Judy, yes it was fiction...LOL...I found a site while I was surfing the net for pictures...and I decided to post poems from some of the pictures....LOL...I'm so glad it made you laugh out loud...the picture did the same to me...thank you do much for a wonderful review...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! I bet that was the quickest divorce, too!!! What judge would deny him? Lol. Not that I'm into it at all, we don't have it here, but I do know how much you all look forward to it, so that dear, poor wife made the biggest blunder in her, soon to be, very short life! LOL. Well done, my friend, loved it. :)) sending loads of hugs and much love! :)) Sandra xxx
Shoe feet put off again, hope to get them next Tuesday! :((
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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LOL! I bet that was the quickest divorce, too!!! What judge would deny him? Lol. Not that I'm into it at all, we don't have it here, but I do know how much you all look forward to it, so that dear, poor wife made the biggest blunder in her, soon to be, very short life! LOL. Well done, my friend, loved it. :)) sending loads of hugs and much love! :)) Sandra xxx
Shoe feet put off again, hope to get them next Tuesday! :((
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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HI Sandra, hey she got a new pair of shoes...LOL...baseball and football here are a mans dream...and then comes his wife...LOL...thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...now I have to clean the house...papers everywhere...and I just filled a bag...LOL...smiling back at you...and have a wonderful day....so much love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from robyn corum
hahahahahahahahaha!
Linda,
What kind of picture is that??? I know those aren't real seats that are available for sale - right? Please tell me that.
This poem was soooo fun. I loved the spin you were able to put on this awesome image. Great job! You REALLY need to post more often!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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hahahahahahahahaha!
Linda,
What kind of picture is that??? I know those aren't real seats that are available for sale - right? Please tell me that.
This poem was soooo fun. I loved the spin you were able to put on this awesome image. Great job! You REALLY need to post more often!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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HI Robyn, I just found a site of crazy pictures...LOL...I looked at this one for awhile...I was wondering why the wall...to me...I guess maybe under construction...their going to have to remove the wall...or the seats...LOL...there only good if someone hits a fly ball over the wall...thank you for a wonderful review you...so glad you like it sweet one...later...I have to clean the house...papers everywhere...and I already filled a bag...LOL...love you lots...Linda xxoo
Comment from Mistydawn
Hehehehe. Poor wife thought she did a good thing, saved some money too. Guess that's how cons make their money, praying on people's good intentions. It's well-written, very interesting, realistic. Your characters came to life.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Hehehehe. Poor wife thought she did a good thing, saved some money too. Guess that's how cons make their money, praying on people's good intentions. It's well-written, very interesting, realistic. Your characters came to life.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Hi Misty, thank you for a wonderful review...so glad you like it...and you are so right about cons...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Coco Jane
An amusing look at the coyple's different views on opening day.
Consider adding punctuation to clarify meaning. Use quotation marks around people's exact words and periods at ends of sentences or stanzas. The poem will read more smoothly that way.
In stanza 1, "were" should be "we're."
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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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An amusing look at the coyple's different views on opening day.
Consider adding punctuation to clarify meaning. Use quotation marks around people's exact words and periods at ends of sentences or stanzas. The poem will read more smoothly that way.
In stanza 1, "were" should be "we're."
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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all fixed...thank you....love xxoo
Comment from 24chas
This was hilarious, Linda. I loved it. The story was funny and I could definitely see this happening to someone. The ending was really perfect. Good job.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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This was hilarious, Linda. I loved it. The story was funny and I could definitely see this happening to someone. The ending was really perfect. Good job.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Hi Chas, thank you so very much sweet guy for a wonderful review...I'm glad it gave you a laugh...I just loved the picture...that would be the seat I would end up with...LOL...love Linda xxoo
