Baseball Season Started
just for fun63 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun and humorous poem about buying tickets for the baseball game on the blackmarket for a bargain and get a surprise seat that make you stare at the brick wall. LOL
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are you haveing[having] fun ?
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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A very well-written fun and humorous poem about buying tickets for the baseball game on the blackmarket for a bargain and get a surprise seat that make you stare at the brick wall. LOL
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are you haveing[having] fun ?
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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HI Sandra, thank you for the help sweet girl...and for a wonderful review...so glad you like it....love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Sally Law
Aw, sweetheart, this is so adorable. I can just see you sitting there...chilling...doing your nails...eating a dog. So cute and a tribute to a fine day at the baseball game, regardless of how you acquired the tickets. I am certain your nails dried fast as you ran all the way to the car.
All my best, dear Linda,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Aw, sweetheart, this is so adorable. I can just see you sitting there...chilling...doing your nails...eating a dog. So cute and a tribute to a fine day at the baseball game, regardless of how you acquired the tickets. I am certain your nails dried fast as you ran all the way to the car.
All my best, dear Linda,
Sal xo
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Hi Sally, it wasn't sweet girl...LOL..thank you for a wonderful review you...I am so glad you like it...and all my best to you as well......love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Linda, I really enjoyed exceptionally written very hilarious poem about the beginning of baseball season. It is funny at times the travails people go through for tickets to that first game. When I lived here before I left, we had some scrambling to get tickets. Well done my friend. Take and love you,,,,,,,Jimmy
I am recovering well after being grievously septic back in January. It has been one problem after another, but, I'm still here!!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Linda, I really enjoyed exceptionally written very hilarious poem about the beginning of baseball season. It is funny at times the travails people go through for tickets to that first game. When I lived here before I left, we had some scrambling to get tickets. Well done my friend. Take and love you,,,,,,,Jimmy
I am recovering well after being grievously septic back in January. It has been one problem after another, but, I'm still here!!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Hi Jimmy, OMG...two exceptional's...I am so honored sweet guy...and so happy you enjoyed it...once again...thank you for all your kindness Jimmy...and all your lovely stars...and thank you for your so awesome reviews...you so made my day...love to you...Linda xxoo
I am so sorry you are having such bad physical problems...I know back problems can be so painful my sweet friend...I have had three back surgeries...and one problem can lead to another...just take it very easy...lift nothing...I thank God you are still here...God Bless Jimmy...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
LOL I have seen this picture before and you did it justice using a great abcb rhyming form and really made it humorous. Love the last line that really sealed it
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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LOL I have seen this picture before and you did it justice using a great abcb rhyming form and really made it humorous. Love the last line that really sealed it
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Hi Barb, I found a site with a lot of great pictures...now I can't remember the name of it...LOL...thank you my sweet friend for a great review...so glad you like it....love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is well-written, rollicking good fun. Great job on the big build up before the huge let-down! Last stanza: spelling "having" and capitalize g of good.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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This is well-written, rollicking good fun. Great job on the big build up before the huge let-down! Last stanza: spelling "having" and capitalize g of good.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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HI Janice, thank you for a great review my sweet friend...and thank you for the help...fixed...so glad you like it...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Heather Knight
This is hilarious. But I would have done the same as the wife. I don't care for sports, shoes are a lot better.
Thanks so much for sharing and making me laugh.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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This is hilarious. But I would have done the same as the wife. I don't care for sports, shoes are a lot better.
Thanks so much for sharing and making me laugh.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Hi Maria, LOL...I am so glad it made you laugh...and thank you for a wonderful review...you are so very welcome...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from susand3022
Hi Linda, A fine, fun, enthusiastic write for baseball season! Go ahead, girl! Get those tickets from the guys fishing down on the pier! No danger of fraud there! LOL ;)
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Hi Linda, A fine, fun, enthusiastic write for baseball season! Go ahead, girl! Get those tickets from the guys fishing down on the pier! No danger of fraud there! LOL ;)
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Hi Susan, LOL...she doesn't sound like the brightest stars in the sky...LOL...thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...made me smile...smiling back at you....love Linda xxoo
Comment from misscookie
I'm not into baseball
Yet you captured my attention the moment I saw the artwork you chooses to go with your poem
I couldn't stop laughing, it wasn't funny to the husband
That is what he gets for sending a women to do a mans job
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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I'm not into baseball
Yet you captured my attention the moment I saw the artwork you chooses to go with your poem
I couldn't stop laughing, it wasn't funny to the husband
That is what he gets for sending a women to do a mans job
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Hi Misscookie, LOL...you are so right...never send a women to do a mans job...thank you for a wonderful review sweet girl...and you are always welcome...much love...Linda xxoo
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Take care until next time.
Cookie
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you too...xxoo love
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peace God be with you and Yours.
Cookie
Comment from Cedar
Hello Linda: Now, this is my favorite type of poetry, good old fashioned fun from start to finish. You did a terrific job with this piece. Did I say"TERRIFIC?"
My favorite stanza was number 6 where you bought the new shoes, that one cracked me up.
It's a dark gloomy rainy day here, but just reading this one cheered me up and put a big smile on my face. Thank you for that...
When you read it out loud, it has such a smooth easy flow. I have to say that this is my favorite poem of yours, so far. I believe it would have won a humor contest. It damn sure would have got my vote.
Have a great weekend Linda and thanks for the laugh, I needed that. "PLAY BALL" Bill
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Hello Linda: Now, this is my favorite type of poetry, good old fashioned fun from start to finish. You did a terrific job with this piece. Did I say"TERRIFIC?"
My favorite stanza was number 6 where you bought the new shoes, that one cracked me up.
It's a dark gloomy rainy day here, but just reading this one cheered me up and put a big smile on my face. Thank you for that...
When you read it out loud, it has such a smooth easy flow. I have to say that this is my favorite poem of yours, so far. I believe it would have won a humor contest. It damn sure would have got my vote.
Have a great weekend Linda and thanks for the laugh, I needed that. "PLAY BALL" Bill
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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HI Bill, was wondering where you were...are you ok???...WOW!!!!.what a wonderful review sweet guy...I am so glad it made you laugh...LOL...LOL...go back and read the one before this one...look at the picture...I found a site with all these crazy pictures...and I love them...decided to post some poems from them...thank you my sweet friend for all your shiny stars...and at least she got a new pair of shoes...I just hope they can run...LOL...
it isn't raining here...but the winds blow you over...this weather is just crazy...even at 65 degrees it feels like 30's and 40's...you have a great weekend as well and you are so welcome...I like baseball...but love football...love ya...Linda xxoo
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I just checked your profile, those are great. I'm really sorry I missed them.
Yeah, I'm O.K., I've just been moving really slow lately. This winter has done a job on me. Hey, thanks for asking. I hope you and the family are doing alright.
Football and boxing are my favorite sports, always have been.
You've really been writing some good stuff here lately, I wish I could say that. I think I'm just getting burned out.
Talk to you later...take care of yourself, my friend...Bill
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi L.,
Lol - I guess she bought some bad tickets, hu? These two sure are on different pages, aren't they? This is a very clever write about the season opening. An enjoyable read with nothing needing revision. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Hi L.,
Lol - I guess she bought some bad tickets, hu? These two sure are on different pages, aren't they? This is a very clever write about the season opening. An enjoyable read with nothing needing revision. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Hi Jan, LOL...she doesn't sound like the brightest star in the sky...LOL...thank you for a wonderful review...and you are soooo welcome my sweet friend...smiling back at you...much love ...Linda xxoo
