Baseball Season Started
just for fun63 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
This is hilarious! We all make mistakes but really, we're talking about new shoes here! Surely you can understand,right? Seriously I'm not a baseball fan but I can understand bad seats. It happens to me all the time at the theater. I love this, it made me smile. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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This is hilarious! We all make mistakes but really, we're talking about new shoes here! Surely you can understand,right? Seriously I'm not a baseball fan but I can understand bad seats. It happens to me all the time at the theater. I love this, it made me smile. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Hi Pam, I?m so glad it made you smile....and I have done so pretty goofy things in my life as well...LOL....thank you for a wonderful review....and you are so very welcome....love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Janilou
Hmmm. See what happens when you fudge the truth? LOL
"where did you get these tickets dear ? "
I asked her, are you having fun ?
You need to close the space between the word fun and the question mark and the word dear and the question mark.
Apart from that, I found no errors.
Cute poem.
All the best,
Jan
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Hmmm. See what happens when you fudge the truth? LOL
"where did you get these tickets dear ? "
I asked her, are you having fun ?
You need to close the space between the word fun and the question mark and the word dear and the question mark.
Apart from that, I found no errors.
Cute poem.
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Hi Jan, thank you for a great review....and thank for the help...all the best to you as well ....Love Linda xxoo
Comment from WryWriter
Hmm. Seats behind the dugout with a brick wall view, or is that a concession stand? Nice. I found this poem very amusing. Needless to say, perfect artwork choice for theme.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Hmm. Seats behind the dugout with a brick wall view, or is that a concession stand? Nice. I found this poem very amusing. Needless to say, perfect artwork choice for theme.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Hi WyWrite, thank you for a great review....I haven?t a clue...LOL...maybe construction....so glad you like it.....Love Linda xxoo
Comment from QC Poet
At least you got some new shoes in the bargain she thought she got on the tickets right? Thanks for the chuckles and smiles on this submission. Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insight.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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At least you got some new shoes in the bargain she thought she got on the tickets right? Thanks for the chuckles and smiles on this submission. Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insight.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Hi G, I'm so glad it made you smiles and gave you some chuckles...and thank you for a wonderful review...and you are so very welcome...Love xxoo
Comment from Brett Matthew West
"on line" should be "online". Seems like the wife messed up and ruined the husband's Opening Day. That would be enough to make many men angry. So, she'd better be able to run real fast and perhaps even walk home. Seems the wife is also pretty much self-centered. Well crafted poem that depicts the specialness of the beginning of baseball and the feeling he would have in this situation.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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"on line" should be "online". Seems like the wife messed up and ruined the husband's Opening Day. That would be enough to make many men angry. So, she'd better be able to run real fast and perhaps even walk home. Seems the wife is also pretty much self-centered. Well crafted poem that depicts the specialness of the beginning of baseball and the feeling he would have in this situation.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Hi Brett, thank you for the help my sweet friend...fixed...love is such a strong emotion...and I think in true love we overlook a lot of things...where there may be one bad fault...there may be many more good ones...thank you for a wonderful review you...Love Linda xxoo
Comment from Carla Trinklein
Ha ha! My 11 year old son lives for baseball. This will be him someday, all over. I love the light-hearted beginning, the twist, the humorous finish! Your poem is a well-told story.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Ha ha! My 11 year old son lives for baseball. This will be him someday, all over. I love the light-hearted beginning, the twist, the humorous finish! Your poem is a well-told story.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Hi Carla, thank you for a great review...I am so glad you like it...my whole family are into football, and baseball, and car racing...hope o see your son on TV with the pro's...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Aussie
Boy, you were sure on a home run with this funny poem. Just like a broad thinking about her new shoes, hope they were flats. This is a different kind of poem from you, I liked it a lot. Yanks are baseball nuts, Aussies are cricket nuts. Baseball has taken on more here and also basketball, we have a lot of Americans teaching our players. Well done my happy one XXXK.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Boy, you were sure on a home run with this funny poem. Just like a broad thinking about her new shoes, hope they were flats. This is a different kind of poem from you, I liked it a lot. Yanks are baseball nuts, Aussies are cricket nuts. Baseball has taken on more here and also basketball, we have a lot of Americans teaching our players. Well done my happy one XXXK.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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HI Kace,I don't know much about cricket...I like baseball...but love football...my whole family are sports nuts...LOL...to say the least...just nuts...ya just have to love them...LOL...thank you Sweetie Pie for wonderful review...and love to you always girl...Linda xxoo
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Happy Easter my friend. Love, Kay
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HAPPY EASTER to you to my beautiful friend...much love you...xxoo
Comment from Mastery
I am an avid baseball nut, Linda. I'm afrain I would have to kill that woman who bought those crappy tickets. Grrrrr. Your poem is all in fun, I know, my lovely, but, just the thought. LOL Bless you. XXXXX Bob
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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I am an avid baseball nut, Linda. I'm afrain I would have to kill that woman who bought those crappy tickets. Grrrrr. Your poem is all in fun, I know, my lovely, but, just the thought. LOL Bless you. XXXXX Bob
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Hi Bob, my whole family are sports nuts...football, baseball, and caring...my favorite is football...I don't watch it much now...mostly college when I do...that would be awful if your wife did something like that...LOL...thank you for a wonderful review...Bless you as well...love xxoo
Comment from nomi338
Ah yes, few bargains are true bargains in a good way. Meat that has an excellent price is probably old meat, about to expire. Wine sold at an excellent price is no doubt from a horrible year for wine rom that vineyard.
That car that is a supposed great car at that price, will no doubt prove to be a perpetual lemon. On and on it goes and never stops. The most painful part is this does not apply to everyone, someone out there is getting the true bargains, it just is not you.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Ah yes, few bargains are true bargains in a good way. Meat that has an excellent price is probably old meat, about to expire. Wine sold at an excellent price is no doubt from a horrible year for wine rom that vineyard.
That car that is a supposed great car at that price, will no doubt prove to be a perpetual lemon. On and on it goes and never stops. The most painful part is this does not apply to everyone, someone out there is getting the true bargains, it just is not you.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Hi Nolan, so very true my sweet friend...thank you for a wonderful review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, I hope her new shows were not high heels. she better run fast. I enjoyed your poem, Linda. Good job with the rhymes and flow of lines. You story was fun to read and a lesson for some to be careful buying what seems could be a great deal. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Well, I hope her new shows were not high heels. she better run fast. I enjoyed your poem, Linda. Good job with the rhymes and flow of lines. You story was fun to read and a lesson for some to be careful buying what seems could be a great deal. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Hi Jan, I've done this myself with money...took my car to a place that want to charge me an arm and a leg to fix it...found this cheaper place...and let them do it...a couple months later...it broke down...the cheaper place wouldn't fix it...have to take it back to the one that cost more...and even more...but it stayed running...now my son is a mechanic...thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend...and you are so very welcome...love Linda xxoo
