The Two of Me
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is a contentment in people conversed, but I believe you have a different meaning here when you throw 'redemption' into the mix, something life changing me thinks, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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There is a contentment in people conversed, but I believe you have a different meaning here when you throw 'redemption' into the mix, something life changing me thinks, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments.
Yes, I was referring to the joyous feeling and satisfaction we get from helping our fellow Human Beings. Blessings to you.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Love is the essence of peaceful living; love at heart can make all conversation successful; I like this poem, two lines are perfectly alright but there is no satori or 'aha' effect in the third line; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Love is the essence of peaceful living; love at heart can make all conversation successful; I like this poem, two lines are perfectly alright but there is no satori or 'aha' effect in the third line; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Still developing my verbal acumen, Thank you for the review and compliments. Blessings!
