Love is the essence of peaceful living; love at heart can make all conversation successful; I like this poem, two lines are perfectly alright but there is no satori or 'aha' effect in the third line; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
Still developing my verbal acumen, Thank you for the review and compliments. Blessings!