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Him/Her Forgive ?

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Comment from Lance S. Loria
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Hahaha! Push him down the stairs. Good complimentary artwork. Nice rhyming flow. I enjoyed reading it. No edits or adjustments necessary.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    Hi Lance, LOL...thank you for a great review...so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Sasha
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Forgiveness for cheating is not something I could do. Love is forever with no time for playing around. I wouldn't try to get back at him but would have nothing more to do with him. Nice work with this one, I love the picture too.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    Hi Sasha, sooooo right sweet girl...thank you for a wonderful review...love you....Linda xxoo
reply by Sasha on 10-Apr-2019
    Fortunately, I have never had anyone cheat on me... that I know of.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    LOL...never say never...LOL...xxoo love
reply by Sasha on 10-Apr-2019
    For me NEVER is a word I take very seriously and stick to when appropriate. Fans may see me as humorous and silly, but stab me in the back and I will NEVER forgive you (not you specifically)...LOL
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    LOL...ok!!! no stabbing you in the back...but remember to get to heaven...you have to forgive...love you girl...off to buy a chicken for dinner...xxoo
reply by Sasha on 10-Apr-2019
    I thought you had to be forgiven to get to heaven????? Maybe I got that wrong. My friend Linda highly advocates forgiveness. She was able to forgive the man that killed her daughter, not sure I could do that. Her husband, the father couldn't do it either.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    Boy Sasha, could I forgive him after I had killed him?...because like you...not sure I could do that...I have always fought against the bullies...physically...I will bring that up in my next bible study class...truly...no!!! I do know you have to be willing to forgive like Jesus did for us...if He can forgive us for what we did to Him...we have to forgive and love our enemies...this is a struggle for me sometimes...but I'm working on it...I am so sorry for the loss of your friends daughter...did you know her daughter?...xxoo
reply by Sasha on 10-Apr-2019
    Yes, I met her several times. This was not the first person this man had killed. There is no reason this should have happened twice. At least he was found guilty the second time. Yes I do have to work on forgiveness, not my strongest point.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    there was a man on one of the shows on TV...I think 20/20...he was telling how he was arrested 14 times for rape...he said they just kept letting him out from over crowding...he said he told them he would do it again...and they still let him out....he was in for murder this time...he never should have been on the streets...have a great evening you...love xxoo
reply by Sasha on 10-Apr-2019
    I have heard of his man before and he does need forgiveness he needs life in jail. Forgiveness is up to the people he offended and/or hurt. They, in turn, can decide for themselves if they want to forgive him.
Comment from Ulla
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Yeah, Linda, He gets what he deserves. Yeah, that's the excuse. I'm only a man. And so? That exonerates him? I think not. Great litte poem.All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    Hi Ulla, men...you can't live with them...and you can't live without them...LOL...maybe...thank you for a great review sweet girl...love you...and smiling back at you...xxoo
Comment from susand3022
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Linda... that was just the best! LOL, I absolutely LOVE the picture! When I read the poem I thought that for sure she'd be up there in her room with another man... ;) ... guess not!

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    Hi Susan, thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review....LOL...I love the picture as well...smiling back at you my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from kiwijenny
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Amen ...you and I agree. I love my husband and the BEST thing about him is that he would never cheat on me. Nor I him..it's ego ...it's cruel.
I'm with you ...he's the creep of the week.._sorry low down cheat
God bless

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    Hi Jen, I know just what you are saying...it's ego...cruel...thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from LisaMay
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Well now, that certainly isn't a stairway to heaven. Seems like the guy can just move right along, and all will be forgiven. I doubt that it was the first time he strayed, there's often a pattern. Clever to use humor with a serious subject... the guys reading it might take a bit more notice. Infidelity is a biggie in a relationship of trust. Good on the woman for valuing herself.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    Hi LisaMay, thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...and you are so very right...where there is no trust...there is no relationship...love...Linda xxoo
Comment from BeasPeas
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I love the image, too, Linda. A stairway leading nowhere. How appropriate. Your poem expresses that some want to keep their "cupcake" and eat it too. Amusing and well done. Marilyn

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    Hi Marilyn, LOL...good way to put my sweet friend...thank you a wondeful review...so glad you like it...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Ross E Silke
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Your poem is elaborate with detail and colours--the colour scheme works very well, and I like your picture to accompany--works fine. The poem is well constructed with a nice pattern scheme and flows steadily. I like the ending of how you describe the adulterer.--it makes it a bit humorous which adds to its appeal I think. It held my attention for the most part. Good descriptions and it rings out well when read I believe.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    Hi Ross, thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from LIJ Red
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I will be danged, I don't believe there is a left turn at the top of those stairs like I first thought...and this relationship is much like those steps...
Excellent poem.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    Hi LlJ, LOL...LOL...your so right...a dead end...thank you for a wonderful review...so glad you like it...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Willie P. Smith
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I wouldn't want to cheat on you. You come right to the point. Cheating is not necessary where there is love.
It is my feelings that if a man/woman cheats once that is the first time, there will be others. Losing one's family is a perfect reason to stay loyal. Very good!

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    HI Willie, Amen Sir...I guess there are those who will forgive...I am sure some make it...but I would bet most don't...true love has to have a trust in it...thank you for a wonderful review...love Linda xxoo