Him/Her Forgive ?
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Comment from Sanku
that was funny. I thought 'what cheek' in the first stanza. Then the first stanza of 'HER' had me disappointed Then the last stanza ...! serves him right .let him come!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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that was funny. I thought 'what cheek' in the first stanza. Then the first stanza of 'HER' had me disappointed Then the last stanza ...! serves him right .let him come!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi Sanka, thank you my friend for a wonderful review...so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Heather Knight
This is very funny, Linda. After all I am a man, what a cheek!
But her answer is priceless. I love the last three lines:
my answer is sure to come
you cheated on me, you creep of the week
it's over you lousy bum (maybe a comma after over)
Thanks for making me smile.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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This is very funny, Linda. After all I am a man, what a cheek!
But her answer is priceless. I love the last three lines:
my answer is sure to come
you cheated on me, you creep of the week
it's over you lousy bum (maybe a comma after over)
Thanks for making me smile.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi Maria, thank you for your help my sweet friend...and a wonderful review...and you are so welcome sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Aussie
Now, where on earth did this little ditty come from? I thought he was going to cop a bucket of water in the face. I enjoyed your banter. Well done mum. Hope he doesn't come back - "be afraid, be very afraid," Behave yourself strong woman. XXK
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Now, where on earth did this little ditty come from? I thought he was going to cop a bucket of water in the face. I enjoyed your banter. Well done mum. Hope he doesn't come back - "be afraid, be very afraid," Behave yourself strong woman. XXK
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi Kace, you are to funny girl...I can't believe some of the pictures I found...they are toooo funny...thought I would use some...LOL...thank you for a wonderful review Sweetie Pie...talk at ya later...much love...Linda xxoo
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Him/Her Forgive?, is a quick exchange that will end with someone getting message at the top of the stairs. Funny verse.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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This poem, Him/Her Forgive?, is a quick exchange that will end with someone getting message at the top of the stairs. Funny verse.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi Bill, thank you my friend for a great review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from WryWriter
I did get a chuckle out of this poem. "Her" first stanza had me scratching my head and then you sprung the surprise with the second stanza. A fun read!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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I did get a chuckle out of this poem. "Her" first stanza had me scratching my head and then you sprung the surprise with the second stanza. A fun read!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi WryWriter, LOL...thank you so much for a wonderful review...found some funny pictures and wanted to use them...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Teri7
Linda, This is a very cute and very well written poem you have penned just for fun about him/her forgiveness? This could be a very real scenario. Very cute words and very nice picture. love you my friend. love and blessings, Teir
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Linda, This is a very cute and very well written poem you have penned just for fun about him/her forgiveness? This could be a very real scenario. Very cute words and very nice picture. love you my friend. love and blessings, Teir
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi Teri, thank you my so sweet friend for a wonderful review...I am so happy you like it...how have you been doing?...I hope you are doing well...God Bless...and Love you much...Linda xxoo
Comment from bob cullen
Justice does exist. Loved the story. His plea for forgiveness attracted the perfect reply. Maybe you could have added a third verse. I would love to have read his reply.
Loved the rhythm and rhyme.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Justice does exist. Loved the story. His plea for forgiveness attracted the perfect reply. Maybe you could have added a third verse. I would love to have read his reply.
Loved the rhythm and rhyme.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi Bob, LOL...thank you my friend for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...Love Linda xxoo
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! I thought the Him vs. Her would be Him trying to explain his very lack of architectural skills. But apparently, he was not faithful and she gave him a completely understandable response!
Very creative and fun one, Linda! Hugs!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Lol! I thought the Him vs. Her would be Him trying to explain his very lack of architectural skills. But apparently, he was not faithful and she gave him a completely understandable response!
Very creative and fun one, Linda! Hugs!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi Helen, thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...so glad you like it my sweet friend...glad it made you laugh...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi L.,
Ha ha ha! Great ending to the bs apologies and excuse for cheating. Nothing here for me to suggest revising. Thanks for sharing your work. Jan :)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi L.,
Ha ha ha! Great ending to the bs apologies and excuse for cheating. Nothing here for me to suggest revising. Thanks for sharing your work. Jan :)
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi Jan, LOL...thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...and you sweet girl are so welcome...smiling back at you...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from LG Wolfe
Haha! This is hilarious. I honestly didn't know what I was reading when I read the guy's perspective. You've done a great job of getting into both characters. Thanks for the laughs.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Haha! This is hilarious. I honestly didn't know what I was reading when I read the guy's perspective. You've done a great job of getting into both characters. Thanks for the laughs.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi LG, the first four lines tell of him trying to say he was sorry for cheating on her...she wasn't buying it...LOL...thank you for a great review...Love Linda xxoo
