Him/Her Forgive ?
just for fun67 total reviews
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Wow! It starts on the right foot-- confessing (a sin) is half forgiven, they say. You had fun with this write; reading it feels like an invitation to a higher ground but alas, surprise...falls short of expectation.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Wow! It starts on the right foot-- confessing (a sin) is half forgiven, they say. You had fun with this write; reading it feels like an invitation to a higher ground but alas, surprise...falls short of expectation.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Hi Donka, thank you my friend for a great review....so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from MissMerri
Beautiful stairs leading upward to ... a blank, impenetrable wall. LOL. How perfectly appropriate. I thought your poem was amusing and fun and very well written. It is also very believable... unless you're Hillary. Then I guess you get in the habit of forgiving. Well done Linda. Made me smile.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Beautiful stairs leading upward to ... a blank, impenetrable wall. LOL. How perfectly appropriate. I thought your poem was amusing and fun and very well written. It is also very believable... unless you're Hillary. Then I guess you get in the habit of forgiving. Well done Linda. Made me smile.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Hi Misscookie, LOL sweet girl...soooo very true...I am so glad it made you smile...thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend...have a wonderful evening...love much...Linda xxoo
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Hi Adonna, I was reading my reviews,,,and saw where I called you Misscookie.....I am so sorry...and hope you will forgive me...I have been going back and fourth talking to Misscookie...I am truly sorry...and I am so happy it made you smile...this is not the first time I have messed up on names...I called Nomi (Nolan)...a girls names once...so sorry...Linda love you...xxoo
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I've been called much worse, Linda. LOL It happens and I don't mind, really.
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smiling at ya...love to you...xxoo
Comment from rspoet
Hello Linda,
Well, he got what he deserved and she deserved much better,
but maybe she should make a better choice in the first place,
not all men are bums. lol
Excellent rhymed poem
Love the stairway to nowhere, wonder how many (men) have climbed it.
Women would look up first and realize it when nowhere.
Well done
Robert
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Hello Linda,
Well, he got what he deserved and she deserved much better,
but maybe she should make a better choice in the first place,
not all men are bums. lol
Excellent rhymed poem
Love the stairway to nowhere, wonder how many (men) have climbed it.
Women would look up first and realize it when nowhere.
Well done
Robert
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Hi Robert, LOL...you don't know some one until you go out with them...and I know not all men are bums...there are a couple good ones...LOL...thank you for a wonderful review you...the picture made me do it...LOL...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation, Linda.
-I like this poem with his
and hers viewpoints.
-Obviously, each sees
the situation in a very
different light.
-He seems confident that
all will be okay with her.
-I like how you make us
think she is okay with
things, too, in the first verse,
but then she lets him
have the truth!
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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-Very nice image and
presentation, Linda.
-I like this poem with his
and hers viewpoints.
-Obviously, each sees
the situation in a very
different light.
-He seems confident that
all will be okay with her.
-I like how you make us
think she is okay with
things, too, in the first verse,
but then she lets him
have the truth!
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Hi Pam, I just love the picture...made me laugh...thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...and you are so welcome...love you...Linda xxoo
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It was a great picture; I liked your humor in it!
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thank you....smiling big...xxoo love
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🙂🙂for your humorous poem-they are his/her smileys!
Comment from Hayley Zemontas
I found this a refreshing, lighthearted piece and like the way you approached it humourously despite the serious topic. I also wholeheartedly appreciated the way that the female in your poem stuck two fingers up to the cheating scumbag! That's girl power right there. I can't stand when people make allowances for infidelity because 'he's a man' as if men have no self control and live by different rules than women. A cheat is a cheat regardless of the gender. Your poem is very original as well with the way you split it into the 2 different genders and made it into a conversation. X
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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I found this a refreshing, lighthearted piece and like the way you approached it humourously despite the serious topic. I also wholeheartedly appreciated the way that the female in your poem stuck two fingers up to the cheating scumbag! That's girl power right there. I can't stand when people make allowances for infidelity because 'he's a man' as if men have no self control and live by different rules than women. A cheat is a cheat regardless of the gender. Your poem is very original as well with the way you split it into the 2 different genders and made it into a conversation. X
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Hi Hayley, thank you for a wonderful review...and sooooo true...love xxoo
Comment from ElPoetry001
Excellent.
The dialogue is correct, what should "Mr. Pid" expect.
I guess he has not made the connection yet. His first name is:"Stu."
He should not be upset by reaction to his deception.
After all, he probably claims to be well read, yet he does not understand what Nietzsche said: "I'm not upset that you lied to me, I'm upset that from now on I can't believe you."
Sorry, does not erase the facts. Flowers do not cover the smell.
"Everybody does it," is not accurate; and that statement is as stupid as it is it weak."
Any woman that is scorned, in that manner, must discard the loser.
Some people just do not get it.
As one writer said: "I forgive, him, I forgive myself, but I remember everything."
A man that cheats is a "sows ear," and he will never be faithful, nor a silk purse.
Your reward will be his future recognition of a great loss.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Excellent.
The dialogue is correct, what should "Mr. Pid" expect.
I guess he has not made the connection yet. His first name is:"Stu."
He should not be upset by reaction to his deception.
After all, he probably claims to be well read, yet he does not understand what Nietzsche said: "I'm not upset that you lied to me, I'm upset that from now on I can't believe you."
Sorry, does not erase the facts. Flowers do not cover the smell.
"Everybody does it," is not accurate; and that statement is as stupid as it is it weak."
Any woman that is scorned, in that manner, must discard the loser.
Some people just do not get it.
As one writer said: "I forgive, him, I forgive myself, but I remember everything."
A man that cheats is a "sows ear," and he will never be faithful, nor a silk purse.
Your reward will be his future recognition of a great loss.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Hi ElPoetry001, I Love...Flowers do not cover the smell...so very true...thank you for all your lovely stars....and a wonderful review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Janet Foor
LOL! I enjoyed this clever poem Linda. I did think she was going to be waiting for him with someone else with her at the top of the stairs.
Would serve him right. :))))
Well done my friend and your story was from a better perspective than mine.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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LOL! I enjoyed this clever poem Linda. I did think she was going to be waiting for him with someone else with her at the top of the stairs.
Would serve him right. :))))
Well done my friend and your story was from a better perspective than mine.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Hi Janet, LOl...yes it would have...thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...smiling back at you...Blessing to you as well...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Judy Swanson
So much truth in this humorous poem. "Only once... it will never happen again... she meant nothing to me... it is only you I love..." are words spoken by so many who expect the "other" to act as if nothing has happened. I half suspected HER to slap him back with a story of her own indiscretions, but had to laugh when I realize she was planning revenge.
Judy
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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So much truth in this humorous poem. "Only once... it will never happen again... she meant nothing to me... it is only you I love..." are words spoken by so many who expect the "other" to act as if nothing has happened. I half suspected HER to slap him back with a story of her own indiscretions, but had to laugh when I realize she was planning revenge.
Judy
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Hi Judy, thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
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Linda, you are so welcome.
Judy
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smiling back at you...xxoo love
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Still smiling, sending a hug. Judy
Comment from TPAC
Good story like a brief soap opera, gripping to heart emotions, touching face to face confrontation, agreeing with my sis decision. No slips, all stated in my opinion of this work.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Good story like a brief soap opera, gripping to heart emotions, touching face to face confrontation, agreeing with my sis decision. No slips, all stated in my opinion of this work.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Hi TPAC, thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...so good to see you...love Linda xxoo
Comment from mancub
This is a very fun creative and enjoyable poem, I like how you put this together, your expectations rise as you read this and the transition from the man to the woman has a fun little twist and a ending is fun. This is a poem that many will relate to and it has a bit of humor as the man ultimately get what he deserves, very nicely done, you have a great poem, nice flow and nice rhyme, Thank you for sharing, Mancub
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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This is a very fun creative and enjoyable poem, I like how you put this together, your expectations rise as you read this and the transition from the man to the woman has a fun little twist and a ending is fun. This is a poem that many will relate to and it has a bit of humor as the man ultimately get what he deserves, very nicely done, you have a great poem, nice flow and nice rhyme, Thank you for sharing, Mancub
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Hi Mancub, thank you so much my friend for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...and you are so very welcome...love Linda xxoo
