NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Whitney's Beat"A poem a day - April 2019
16 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
That's okay, I have nonet brain, or is that no brain. I forget. I do enjoy this and I am putting this cute little ditty in my bookcase right now. Love it!
All my best,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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That's okay, I have nonet brain, or is that no brain. I forget. I do enjoy this and I am putting this cute little ditty in my bookcase right now. Love it!
All my best,
Sal xo
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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LOL! You're funny, Sal!
Thank you for the great feedback and for shelving this one :)
Kindest regards as always, Debra x
Comment from Maria Millsaps
Don't worry about your brain in a month, lol. This is really cute and witty. I enjoyed the settle humor and it works with the 3/4/3/4/3/7 pattern. Good job.
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Don't worry about your brain in a month, lol. This is really cute and witty. I enjoyed the settle humor and it works with the 3/4/3/4/3/7 pattern. Good job.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much, Maria :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Debra,
Ha ha ha! Laughing with, not at, you. Poetry really does change our brain function. Very nicely written and humorous. Good luck and thanks for a chuckle. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Hi Debra,
Ha ha ha! Laughing with, not at, you. Poetry really does change our brain function. Very nicely written and humorous. Good luck and thanks for a chuckle. Jan :-)
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much, Jan :) Glad to share a chuckle with you! Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Sandra Montanino
This is a really cute little poem. It sounds like a great way to introduce poetry to children in school. Good work. Best of luck in the contest!! Hope you win.
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This is a really cute little poem. It sounds like a great way to introduce poetry to children in school. Good work. Best of luck in the contest!! Hope you win.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much, Sandra :) I appreciate your feedback! Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I love it. I love it truly, it is quite a piece and where did you find the picture to go with it? Nicely done in the one two three... oh dear now you have me doing it
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I love it. I love it truly, it is quite a piece and where did you find the picture to go with it? Nicely done in the one two three... oh dear now you have me doing it
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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LOL! Thank you so much, Barb :) I appreciate your feedback as always, best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from 24chas
This was really cool, Debra. And, hey, whatever it takes to remember how to do it, right? This was a good poem about the poem that you just wrote. Good job.
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This was really cool, Debra. And, hey, whatever it takes to remember how to do it, right? This was a good poem about the poem that you just wrote. Good job.
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Thanks Chas! Glad you enjoyed this little bit of fun :) Best wishes as always, Debra
