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A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.

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Comment from Earl Corp
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

The message in your poem is both powerful and positive. At first glance it looks like an ode to the seven deadly sins, but the call to wipe them out catches the reader's attention. Very nice job.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
    I believe I have already presented about 60 of these is not because that was started several months ago maybe close to 70 all of them are extremely like that thanks for revealing again girls dr. Ricky 1024 and have a blessed day 17 years cast really
Comment from Sally Law
Excellent
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Sorry I missed this, dear Ricky. I fanned you ages ago and for some reason I do not get alerted when you post. I will fan you, again, so as not to miss. This was a deep and poignant write of our loss as a nation, but you go even deeper seeing the personal loss of the individual person. A view from the tender soul that you are.
All my best,
Sal :+))

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this one too
    Ricky