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My 2019 NaPoWriMo poetic exploration.

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 3-6-9 poem about forgiveness. It is the hardest thing to do especially when the culprit keep doing things that you need to forgive, but it is for our own good to keep forgiving.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
    Hi Sandra,
    Forgiveness is such an important act that can erase the hard feelings on both sides, truly a necessity in life. Thank you for the kind comments.

    Kim
Comment from Gloria ....
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Hey Kim. Great to see you posting again. I very much enjoy the originality in this fine poem. Mascara can be a mess when there's tears involved.

Excellent addition to your NaPo project and I wish you great luck with the Contest Committee.

Gloria

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    Hi Gloria!

    I couldn't resist the lure of NaPoWriMo once again. It seems I'm always so busy and life has definitely been getting in the way of posting my poetry... though, I try not to let it get too much in the way of writing it, at least! Loved the comments! It is wonderful to hear from you!

    Kim
Comment from Sasha
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This is a terrific entry for the 3-6-9 and great addition to you book. You have terrific talent and it shows in every poem you post. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    Hi Sasha!
    It is so hard to gauge the short forms, but I enjoy the challenge. I'm really happy that this one speaks to you.

    Kim
reply by Sasha on 10-Apr-2019
    Yes, it did.
Comment from Pantygynt
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This is very true. Stick with it for the NaPoWriMo contest and what a great idea to enter others at the same time. You gotta be in'em to win 'em, to adapt the phrase slightly

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    Thanks, Jim!
    I'm enjoying the theme :) Lots to think about. So many ideas to run with. I appreciate your support.

    Kim
Comment from dovemarie
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Dear Kim, Thank you for writing this short and sweet 3-6-9 poem about forgiveness. I need to give and receive a lot of forgiveness myself. Especially at this Lenten and Easter season. Donna

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    Hi Donna,

    I'm so happy that you enjoyed this short piece on forgiveness. Thank you.

    Kim
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I liked these words, especially the 'mascara mess' a unique and clever write, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, you hit the spot for me, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    Hi Dolly!

    Thank you for the kind comments. I truly appreciate your feedback!

    Kim
Comment from Debra White
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Hi Dovey :)
You have got it so right... forgiveness is like a balm. It takes the weight of guilt away. I like your reference to mascara - the gentle humour added another touch of lightness.
Good Luck in the contest. Best wishes, Debra :)

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    Hi Debra -

    I am so happy that you liked the mascara line, you were the first to comment on it. Thank you for the wonderful notes.

    Kim