The Gift of Life Book # Two (2019)
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Fade to Black"Angelic and Dedicated Poetry.
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Comment from Liberty Justice
BEAUTIFUL 6 STARS ******Such lovely lament testimonial for your son and wife using the rivers flowing as symbols of travel and loss and how life flows on even through adversities. WELL WRITTEN, Ricky. Read review mine also. lolol How are you doing, Ricky? liberty justice
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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BEAUTIFUL 6 STARS ******Such lovely lament testimonial for your son and wife using the rivers flowing as symbols of travel and loss and how life flows on even through adversities. WELL WRITTEN, Ricky. Read review mine also. lolol How are you doing, Ricky? liberty justice
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Always a pleasure to see your reviews of my work dear you have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow -- memories that fade like God's panes of glass... that's really a unique line there. Combined with 'the rivers flow and call out my name' the overall feel here is one of helplessness and despair.... a mood that carries forward with the reader.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Wow -- memories that fade like God's panes of glass... that's really a unique line there. Combined with 'the rivers flow and call out my name' the overall feel here is one of helplessness and despair.... a mood that carries forward with the reader.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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When I was writing this one it was cutting like through a pane of Glass.
And, directly into my mind.
I had no chance to fall as it push my pen..
Forever more...
And, Nevermore....
Quote The Raven
Quote The Raven and Poe.
'Nevermore'
