Comment from ngage

Excellent

This deserves a ten, Ms. Shana. Outstanding creativity and the artwork is an eyecatcher. Your writing is easy to follow as the story always flows well. Your chapters are exciting from the start to the end.
I've never known an author to write a story that can draw the reader in even if they were to read from the middle of the story. You manage to make each chapter full of emotion, drama, and action. You always entertain me. Another great one!

Nate

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019

Awww... thanks Nate! :)

You just made my whole day! I've been sick with a cold and I think you made me brighten up.
If I can entertain readers with my story, I am so happy. That is the best reward. So far, I'm very excited about this book. I'm hoping everyone will like the suspense in this story. It's more of a horror than the rest. I'm sure if you're a fan of Dracula stories, you'll enjoy this.

Thanks for all your support!
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

I don't know what to say Shana, other than I'm not worthy. (Only being once in God's presence, although really we are there all the time, it feels like how Lailah felt, in Heaven it's like that all the time) I love the way your God given talent works, it is on an earthly understanding of functional Angels, that they are of super designation,(one Angel disposed of a 186,000 Assyrian enemies of Israel in one night, 2kings 19:35) there is some evidence of angels mating with women, (where Goliath came from, but maybe fallen angels.)
If you can read a book called "Heaven is for real" it will help with ideas), there is also a film, but the book is best, it's also on YouTube interviews. It might help with writing, well done my faithful friend. Blessings Shana. Roy

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019

Thank you, Roy :)
You are very worthy my friend. It's people like you that bring inspiration of healing, goodwill, and knowledge. I'm just happy you enjoyed the chapter.
And thanks for the info on the book. That sounds great. I will look it up in Amazon. I'm sure it will help with my story pertaining to the heavens and amgels.
Thanks again. So grateful.

Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 09-Apr-2019

Well done my friend.

Comment from Christine Wissner

Excellent

I have rarely read fiction such as this, but I found it interesting and enjoyed the storyline. I find it difficult to judge someone's work if I'm not familiar with it. I give you credit for your ability as a writer to put together a lovely story. Well done.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019

Thank you, Christine! :)

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter., especially since this is not your normal read. That's great!
I do enjoy creating new adventures for my Breedline characters.

Thanks again,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

I like the way you both started and ended this chapter. It has left me with hope for, to mention a few, Sebastian, the fury and Lailah. You touch on what could happen next, yet leave it open for just about anything. Wonderful writing!

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019

Thank you, Faye! :)

This chapter was very important to create, and it is wonderful to hear you enjoyed it all the way through. I feel there is hope for anyone if they pray for it. Stay tuned.

Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 09-Apr-2019

Staying tuned!

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

This is another well-written chapter, very interesting. Your characters, dialogue and action seem real. Nice job as always. The idea you came up with is great, it really adds to the story.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019

Thank you, Misty! :)

So good to hear from you. This chapter was very important to create. It tells a little of Lailah's past. My favorite part to write was when she got to meet God. Wow! Can you imagine?

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by Mistydawn on 09-Apr-2019

That would be amazing for sure. Think I'd be star-struck not know what to say, or I'd be a studdering idiot.

Comment from Tina Crute

Excellent

Well, you have creativity oozing out of your pores! This kept me intetested, and it's not the usual type of literature that I read but it is beautiful and intriguing at the same time.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019

Thank you, Tina! :)

So glad you enjoyed this chapter. It was fun to create, especially the scene with Lailah getting to meet God. I gave you my thoughts on how I imagine him to be and how I would feel meeting him.

Thanks so much!
Shana :)

reply by Tina Crute on 09-Apr-2019

Yes, I wondered
too, when I read
It.... I think I will
be speechless and
not be able to look
at him because
he's so perfect
I will probably
cry LOL.