The Gift of Life Book # Two (2019)
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Comfort Me Please?"Angelic and Dedicated Poetry.
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Comment from Bill Schott
I am supposing that this poem has escaped its master before completing its training as an artistic piece. This is me cobbing twenty cents and saying that you may need to revise this.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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I am supposing that this poem has escaped its master before completing its training as an artistic piece. This is me cobbing twenty cents and saying that you may need to revise this.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Posting on that dates tomorrow April.11th, 2019
Ricky
Comment from mancub
I will look out for this when it is complete, look within yourself and let your mind express the words with sincere feelings, don't hesitate or question yourself simply express what you feel, there is no wrong in ones self expression for it is the true value of life, and often the answers one may seek come from the words that are received, I am not sure why you posted this before you started but hopefully this will give you some encouragement, remember, Believe in yourself always, Mancub
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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I will look out for this when it is complete, look within yourself and let your mind express the words with sincere feelings, don't hesitate or question yourself simply express what you feel, there is no wrong in ones self expression for it is the true value of life, and often the answers one may seek come from the words that are received, I am not sure why you posted this before you started but hopefully this will give you some encouragement, remember, Believe in yourself always, Mancub
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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It's in a holding mode to not lose the post
Released.
Dr. Ricky 1024
