NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Mall Vacation"National Poetry Writing Month
12 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Great job with this post. I'm right next door in Wisconsin. Have not been there either. Shopping isn't my "thing." However, like you say, for the experience it would be fun--especially the eating part. Marilyn
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Great job with this post. I'm right next door in Wisconsin. Have not been there either. Shopping isn't my "thing." However, like you say, for the experience it would be fun--especially the eating part. Marilyn
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Hi Marilyn! I can't keep up with your travels. It would be a nice visit. You're nice. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Boogienights
I like this poem, because you talk about one of my happy places. We only Live 200 miles from Mall Of America and have been there lots of times. The problem is, we usually don't have money when we go there, or if we do it goes very fast. Love it though. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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I like this poem, because you talk about one of my happy places. We only Live 200 miles from Mall Of America and have been there lots of times. The problem is, we usually don't have money when we go there, or if we do it goes very fast. Love it though. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Hi! I suppose I'm good at daydreaming. Mall trips are the same to me close to home. God bless you. Hearts & hugs, Sunnilicious
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written rhyming poem about the biggest mall in the world where there are so many shops it will take more than one day to go through them all.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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A very well-written rhyming poem about the biggest mall in the world where there are so many shops it will take more than one day to go through them all.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Hi Sandra! Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Mall Vacation, is a quick description of this iconic mall in Minnesota. I went there once when I lived in Iowa. My kids rode on the Snoopy Train which ran through the center of the complex.
Found this: There are plenty (of) stores at this mall,
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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This poem, Mall Vacation, is a quick description of this iconic mall in Minnesota. I went there once when I lived in Iowa. My kids rode on the Snoopy Train which ran through the center of the complex.
Found this: There are plenty (of) stores at this mall,
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Hi Bill! That sounds like a nice family vacation memory. I'd love to see that mall in December. Lolz. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your delight about malls and Mall of America in particular. Your rhymes and reference to a vacation added to the joy. Sweet dreams- Joan
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thank you for sharing your delight about malls and Mall of America in particular. Your rhymes and reference to a vacation added to the joy. Sweet dreams- Joan
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Hi Joan! You're nice. Thank you. Goodnight. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Sunni,
Ha ha ha! Sounds like you had fun there. I never wanted to fight the Six Flags traffic to go to that mall, so I got it all done at Woodfield. Lol Very nicely written. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Hi Sunni,
Ha ha ha! Sounds like you had fun there. I never wanted to fight the Six Flags traffic to go to that mall, so I got it all done at Woodfield. Lol Very nicely written. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Hi Jan! You're funny. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
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Hi Alicia,
Oh, I mean it - I generally avoided Woodfield like the plague as well... Not a shopper I guess. :-)
Comment from kiwijenny
I am not a mall fan ...I don't like the constant beat ..demanding my hard earned money
I like this poem and it's rhythm I too like gifts and joy..
God bless
And comfort
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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I am not a mall fan ...I don't like the constant beat ..demanding my hard earned money
I like this poem and it's rhythm I too like gifts and joy..
God bless
And comfort
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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We all have different tastes and ideas of enjoyment. God bless you.
Thank you :)
Comment from Lobber
Your poem is a bit like a rap but obviously more poetic...bigger is better...smaller is smaller...braver is better...better is better? ... repeating is repeating...perhaps...
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Your poem is a bit like a rap but obviously more poetic...bigger is better...smaller is smaller...braver is better...better is better? ... repeating is repeating...perhaps...
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Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Repeats are a way of rhyming and/or poetic device. Thank you :)
Comment from Sandra Montanino
Boy, that is a big Mall. I might say, enjoy it while it lasts. They say malls are becoming a thing of the past. I don't understand why because they protect us from the elements and offer a one-stop-shop. I really liked your piece and I think everyone can identify with it. Good luck with the contest!!!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Boy, that is a big Mall. I might say, enjoy it while it lasts. They say malls are becoming a thing of the past. I don't understand why because they protect us from the elements and offer a one-stop-shop. I really liked your piece and I think everyone can identify with it. Good luck with the contest!!!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Hi! Malls are great. Thank you :)
Comment from Irish Rain
I would LOVE to go there!
I think my son went there years ago
on his way to Alaska.
He's been everywhere!
A mall that size should have
a hotel, ha ha...
because it would probably
take a few days to see every thing!!
Love this!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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I would LOVE to go there!
I think my son went there years ago
on his way to Alaska.
He's been everywhere!
A mall that size should have
a hotel, ha ha...
because it would probably
take a few days to see every thing!!
Love this!
Blessings...
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Hi Judy! They have hotel packages to the mall. Your son went... I'm upset. I wanna go. My poem would be written a lot better because of the experience. Someday, I'll visit. Maybe you too. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
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Yes, we will!!!
