Stargazer
a 3 Line entry15 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi June. This is very nice indeed. Lilies are a wonderful addition to any garden. I'm thrilled that mine are propagating. Using the name of the lily combined with great descriptions in each line make for a super entry into the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi June. This is very nice indeed. Lilies are a wonderful addition to any garden. I'm thrilled that mine are propagating. Using the name of the lily combined with great descriptions in each line make for a super entry into the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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I love lilies. They are not only beautiful, but also very resilient. Thanks for dropping by.
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It's interesting that the ones that seem the most delicate turn out to be the most hardy.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three-line poem about the lovely lily with her fragrance seems to gaze up in the skies watching the stars with her beautiful face.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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A very well-written three-line poem about the lovely lily with her fragrance seems to gaze up in the skies watching the stars with her beautiful face.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your encouraging feedback.
Comment from Aussie
Hi June, this is a great entry for the three-line poem. Beautiful photo to compliment your little poem. Looks like an orchid? Not sure about coming out to play at night. Thought they all curled up for bed. Well done XXK.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Hi June, this is a great entry for the three-line poem. Beautiful photo to compliment your little poem. Looks like an orchid? Not sure about coming out to play at night. Thought they all curled up for bed. Well done XXK.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece on the lily. Always nice to hear from you.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, June. Good job with the style and correct syllable count per line. The picture is beautiful and your words describe it well. I like the personification of the lily. It is a 'stargazer lily', right? Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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I enjoyed your contest entry, June. Good job with the style and correct syllable count per line. The picture is beautiful and your words describe it well. I like the personification of the lily. It is a 'stargazer lily', right? Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece on the lily. Always nice to hear from you.
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your use of the alliteration of "s's" and personification. Your appeal to our sense of smell and sight is very effective. Best wishes in the 3-Line Poem Contest- Joan
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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I admired your use of the alliteration of "s's" and personification. Your appeal to our sense of smell and sight is very effective. Best wishes in the 3-Line Poem Contest- Joan
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece on the lily. Always nice to hear from you.
Comment from Irish Rain
How beautiful this is!
'oriental spices'...so original, and true!
I love this stunning entry, and the picture is awesome!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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How beautiful this is!
'oriental spices'...so original, and true!
I love this stunning entry, and the picture is awesome!
Blessings...
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece on the lily. Always nice to hear from you.
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Very pretty!
Comment from patcelaw
What a beautifully presented poem for the three line contest. I wish you the best in the contest. Have a blessed week.
Patricia
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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What a beautifully presented poem for the three line contest. I wish you the best in the contest. Have a blessed week.
Patricia
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece on the lily. Always nice to hear from you. And I especially appreciate the generous rating!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The scent, the spices and the stars bring the beauty here in your words and conjure up an ambiance you can get yourself lost inside, I wish you luck with the contest June, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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The scent, the spices and the stars bring the beauty here in your words and conjure up an ambiance you can get yourself lost inside, I wish you luck with the contest June, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece on the lily. Always nice to hear from you.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh what a beautiful offering that has as its focus a gorgeous flower -- absolutely love those Stargazers... and your poem certainly does it justice! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :) ;)
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Oh what a beautiful offering that has as its focus a gorgeous flower -- absolutely love those Stargazers... and your poem certainly does it justice! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :) ;)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece on the lily. Always nice to hear from you.
Comment from Sugarray77
Oh, I just love this, June. This is my favorite Lily and to me is the Queen of that type of flower. Gorgeous photo with such vibrant colors... it really enhances your piece.
Melissa
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Oh, I just love this, June. This is my favorite Lily and to me is the Queen of that type of flower. Gorgeous photo with such vibrant colors... it really enhances your piece.
Melissa
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece on the lily. Always nice to hear from you.
