-The Rippling Prayer-
Free verse3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This is a motivating message to welcome the Holy Spirit into one's life to open us to the possibilities that exist all around us to be God's hands and feet.
I will note that your final word, grandiose, is an adjective where you
need a noun. The noun form of this word is 'grandiosity'.
Happy day.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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This is a motivating message to welcome the Holy Spirit into one's life to open us to the possibilities that exist all around us to be God's hands and feet.
I will note that your final word, grandiose, is an adjective where you
need a noun. The noun form of this word is 'grandiosity'.
Happy day.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thank you ever so kindly for the review. Wise words you put forth.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a serene and peaceful prayer which I would hear at a meditation session, my eyes closed becoming calm and one with nature and at peace, a joy to read Gordon, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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This is a serene and peaceful prayer which I would hear at a meditation session, my eyes closed becoming calm and one with nature and at peace, a joy to read Gordon, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the gracious review. May your personal prayers become head of, and fulfilled.
Comment from Bill Pinder
I like how you expressed your faith in a very creative, unique way in this poem about the working of the Holy Spirit. Great job with this writing! Thanks for sharing.
Bill
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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I like how you expressed your faith in a very creative, unique way in this poem about the working of the Holy Spirit. Great job with this writing! Thanks for sharing.
Bill
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the great review, wishing you many blessings!
