Comment from 24chas

Excellent

This was a good write, Debra. What a thoughtful gift and you expressed it perfectly in this piece. Good flow and all that good stuff. Hope you have a great time!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019

Hi Chas :) We had a fab time, thank you! I have been throughly spoilt :) Back to reality now LOL
Best wishes, Debra

Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno

Excellent

Hey, that is a gift and a half and really hope you both have a splendid evening, and that slap-up birthday meal is a real treat! This is a good whitney to share the moment with too! Soundslike it will be a real family affair with your bother, mum, dad, Shaun, little un's and Molly all in the runnings! Hear is to you and your Sunday lunch as well and I know I shouldn't ask but my curiosity is getting the better of me... does this mean you're a northern family, as I don't know where you're from? Hope you don't mind me asking :)

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019

Hi Dale. We had a fab time, thank you!
Thanks for the great feedback :) We are indeed a northern family! From West Yorkshire to be exact! Where are you located?
Debs :)

reply by Amenian Aypotheeno on 08-Apr-2019

Ah that makes so much sense! I live in place called Rugby (the place where the game was invented!), but my family are all from up north, as we are all Mancs! We are scattered throughout though, with an uncle in Berwick Upon Tweed! Really glad you had a good time, I think you deserve it more besides :)

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Fantastic, Debra. Your Whitney poem and author's note does indeed point out the importance of time spent together. Little brother, head chef--good for him. Sounds like a super birthday. Marilyn

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019

It has been fabulous! Thank you, Marilyn :)
I appreciate your feedback as always, best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
it is a perfect match
I found your write very sweet and heart felted
This well be a day for you guys to memory
Cookie

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019

It was a lovely weekend, thank you!
Best wishes, Debra :)

reply by misscookie on 08-Apr-2019

Glad you had a nice nice week, me to.
Cookie

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

AAAAwww great rhyming in this challenge entry. And using what happens in everyday life makes for the absolute best poetry because there is emotion here.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019

Thank you, Barb :) I appreciate your feedback as always. Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

No need to even respond to me! Please enjoy you special weekend and be abundantly blessed on your birthday weekend. How fun this sounds--your parents are gems!
All my best,
Sal xo

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019

Hi Sal :)
We had an amazing time, thank you! I am a very lucky lady to have such a loving and thoughtful family :)
Sending love, Debra x

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Now THOSE are extraordinary parents. But I can't say I'm surprised, since I've gotten to know you, and you are outstanding, too. You plant corn, you get corn!

I hope this is your best "extended bday" gift yet. Enjoy the food your brother makes, and your enjoy your time away with your beloved. I'll be sending you all kinds of happy vibes. xo

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019

Thank you so much, Rachelle, for your lovely feedback. I'm touched by your comments.
I've had the best time and a birthday to remember!
Best wishes as always, Debra :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I so agree with this special gift, giving her time so that you can have yours, there is no better gift than that. Your presentation is full of promise, happy belated birthday, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019

Thank you, dolly, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes as always, Debra :)

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

I've checked the restaurant online and it looks supercool. You are lucky to still have your parents around.
My dad passed away when he was only 63 and my mum is in a home as she has Alzheimer's.
Have a great time together.
Thanks for sharing this cute poem.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019

Thank you so much, Maria :) It has been a gorgeous weekend, we enjoyed every moment!
I agree, I am very lucky to still have my parents. I'm sorry to hear about your mum's alzheimers. My grandad had alzheimers also - it's a cruel disease.
Sending love, Debra

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

What a wonderful present, Debra! You both certainly deserve some 'us' time, all parents do. Catch up on a bit of romance ... hmm, sounds good to me. Have a wonderful time, my friend, your lovey poem ought to be shown to your parents, I'm sure they will love it. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019

Thank you so much, Sandra :) We had a wonderful time!
Best wishes to you as always, Debra xx