Poetic Treasures and Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Chasing Poetry"A book on nature and feelings and spirituality.
6 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a well written loop poem, dovemarie. To write one and not have the repetition seemed contrived is a difficult thing, but I think yours reads well. It's fun to see where the mind takes the reader in this form. Well done and best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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This is a well written loop poem, dovemarie. To write one and not have the repetition seemed contrived is a difficult thing, but I think yours reads well. It's fun to see where the mind takes the reader in this form. Well done and best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Dear Marilyn, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Donna,
I commend you on your devotion to this process. I've been so busy at work and with other obligations that I haven't been able to keep up on my reviewing or my responses. I promise to read each one, even if I don't write a reply.
You have done really well with the loop form here, I find this style challenging. Great job and good luck on the entire project!
Kim
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Hi Donna,
I commend you on your devotion to this process. I've been so busy at work and with other obligations that I haven't been able to keep up on my reviewing or my responses. I promise to read each one, even if I don't write a reply.
You have done really well with the loop form here, I find this style challenging. Great job and good luck on the entire project!
Kim
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Dear Kim, I was wondering why I hadn't heard from you or read one of your poems until NaPoWriMo came around again. Thank you for your reviews on my contest entries, and thanks again for your help that you've offered to me. Donna
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written loop poem to start the journey of nspowrimo for producing a poem each day for the month of April to honor national poetry month. You have a great start.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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A very well-written loop poem to start the journey of nspowrimo for producing a poem each day for the month of April to honor national poetry month. You have a great start.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a well-written poem about the process of poetry all the challenges a poet faces and the beautiful outcome in the end. I honestly don't know how you poets do it. Use so few words to paint a lovely picture. Nicely done. Good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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This is a well-written poem about the process of poetry all the challenges a poet faces and the beautiful outcome in the end. I honestly don't know how you poets do it. Use so few words to paint a lovely picture. Nicely done. Good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Dear Mistydawn, Thank you for your comments, review and good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, what a beautiful loop poem that eloquently takes the thought of chasing one's muse to the level of beauty! :) ;) Thank you so much for sharing this awesome write for your daily contest offering! :) ;)
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Oh, what a beautiful loop poem that eloquently takes the thought of chasing one's muse to the level of beauty! :) ;) Thank you so much for sharing this awesome write for your daily contest offering! :) ;)
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Dear Y.M., Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Dove,
Ha ha ha! Laughing with, not at, you. I think this is a circumstance we can all relate to. A very good contest entry you've penned. Good luck in the competition and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Hi Dove,
Ha ha ha! Laughing with, not at, you. I think this is a circumstance we can all relate to. A very good contest entry you've penned. Good luck in the competition and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Dear Jan, I just returned to Fan Story after being out of funds. I'm on for another year now. Thank you for your comments and review, and good luck wishes. Dove
