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NaPoWriMo 2019

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A poem a day - April 2019

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Comment from Bill Schott
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Happy Birthday! Your Whitneys have helped us all get in the spirit of being forty-four on the fourth day of the fourth month of the fourth year after 2015. Feliz Cumpleanos!

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
    Thank you so much, Bill! Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from misscookie
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Congratulation oh what fun I had at that age.
take it from a eighty year old mature lady live every day as if it was your las
and forget about yesterday enjoy the surprise you will see in the future.
Don't worry be happy
cookie

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
    Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Best wishes as always, Debra :)
reply by misscookie on 08-Apr-2019
    I pray the same for you and yours.
    Cookie
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written rhymed Whitney to let those who may forgot know that it is your birthday. It is a day that many sometimes will forget about. On the other side of fifty we are glad when very little people rremember our birthday.

A happy belated birthday.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
    LOL! Age is just a number and a birthday should always be celebrated!
    Thanks for your feedback. I appreciate it :)
    Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Cute artwork anad
nice presentation, Debra.
-I like your note, and
Happy Birthday!!!
-Effective rhyme and
birthday message.
-I'll pass on the beer;
but the line is a good one.
-Good luck in NaPoWriMo!

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Hi Pam :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and birthday wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)
reply by Pam (respa) on 05-Apr-2019
    You are very welcome, Debra. Have a great 4/4/44 Day!!🎈🎁🙂
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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Happy Birthday, Debra. This is an adorable little poem you've penned for your B-Day. I love the Minions. lol. That sounds like a lucky string of 4's.
I wish you all the best, Hope you enjoy your day and weekend! Cheers!
~Kerry

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Hi Kerry :) Thank you for the birthday wishes and for your lovely feedback. I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from JudyE
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A very happy birthday to you. Lots of fours turning up for you this year. Maybe you should buy a lottery ticket on the strength of it. I hope you have a wonderful birthday.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    LOL Judy, perhaps I should! Thank you for your lovely feedback and birthday wishes, I appreciate both. Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
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All the fours, droopy drawers! It's your bingo call sign in hoping you have a happy and full house today, full of friends, well-wishers and presents for your special day! Great little ditty whitney in line and in time with you bidet antics, raise a smile and a glass from a far... here is clinking a glass of bubbly with you, along with your effervescent nature, I hope you have a tremendous day :)

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Aw thanks Dale! I appreciate the birthday wishes and your fab feedback! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment from PriscillaAdelleCordell
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Hello, nice poem, fun!! I loved the minions, I think Grude is a great character, so refreshingly nasty. I noticed no errors and the poem read clearly and with a nice rhythm. What a hoot that you're born on April 4th, so close to April fool's day. You will always get that extra fun on your birthday. And even though I'm a wine collector, I don't drink, so I'll pass on the beer, though I'm sure many won't. lol

Have a great day, and thanks for sharing your writing, Deb.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Thank you so much, Deb, for your lovely feedback :) I appreciate it! Best wishes, Debra
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Debra. Fabulous. Happy birthday. I won't join you for a beer, but I will raise my cake plate to you. The fourth of the fourth, love it. I hope you have a wonderful day. Marilyn

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Hi Marilyn :) thank you for the birthday wishes and the lovely feedback! Sending you my best, Debra :)
Comment from Gloria ....
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This is just perfect Debra and a happy birthday to you. Hope you have a wonderful day with your family, full of cheer.

Many thanks for sharing and enjoy your NaPo sprint.

Gloria

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Hi Gloria :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and the birthday wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)