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Don't Say It

Contest Entry (rhymed poem)

19 total reviews 
Comment from patcelaw
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I do not drink coffee as I have never like the taste, but i do appreciate the fact that there are those who must have their morning brew. But, for me make mine tea.
Patricia

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
    Thank you, Patricia. I appreciate your feedback as always, best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Lance S. Loria
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Great rhyming poem about the lack of coffee with a pleasant twist of humor. No edits or adjustments necessary. Congratulations on the poem contest.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
    Thank you so much, Lance :) I appreciate your kind feedback and message of congratulations! Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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lol, No coffee is nothing to joke about, it could make a sane woman go crazy. Hahaha! This is a fantastic entry, Debra. Enjoy your weekend.
~Kerry

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
    Thank you so much, Kerry, for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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I like how well you've captured the feelings and emotions of a serious coffee drinker in this. It's exactly how you've stated. Although I'm not a coffee drinker at all, I've encountered this kind of attitude first hand. This is really funny and I enjoyed reading how well you've presented this and brought it forth. Great job and well done Debra!

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
    Thank you so much for your great feedback, Jeffrey. I appreciate it! Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from moongirlwriter
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Yep. . .that sounds good to me too. There's a reason you have the most votes. :) Cute rhyme and I do like the way you've incorporated the artwork. I used that in my as well.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Hi :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it!
    There's still a few hours left for the votes to come in, so anything could happen!
    Kindest regards, Debra :)
reply by moongirlwriter on 05-Apr-2019
    I'm not sure how the voting works but I do wish we could have more than one vote. If I didn't vote for my own, I wouldn't have any votes! Ha ha ha
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    That happens to me a lot!!
    It would be nice if we could have an extra vote! :)
reply by moongirlwriter on 05-Apr-2019
    :)
Comment from Catmusings
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Such a fun bouncy poem and I could definitely relate to it. I NEED my coffee so no one gets hurt.

Good rhyming scheme with rhythms and rhymes that fit really well. I especially liked your repetition of that line "Don't say there's no coffee" for emphasis. It's a crisis, I tell you! Haha!

Well done and good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Thank you so much, catmusings for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
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Oh no not another cuppa crisis, I never have a coffee in the morning... maybe that's why I am Mr Grumpy! No wait I know what this is, its the prefect excuse for getting back in bed and having a duvet day right??? This is quite a witty poem with great repeat rhyme and really easy to relate too! Keep your great pen flowing with caffeine I say!

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Cheers Dale :) I always start my day with a coffee then I generally drink water and tea throughout the day...I'm a creature of habit!
    Thanks for your great feedback as always, Debs :)
Comment from BeasPeas
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Great job with this fun poem. I feel exactly the same. Gotta have my cuppa java. Nicely rhymed. A fun read. Good luck in the contest with this one. Marilyn

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Hi Marilyn :) Thank you for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment from Heather Knight
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I don't usually drink coffee, just tea. However, this is hilarious and I enjoyed reading it very much. You have a great sense of humour.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Aw thanks, Maria :) I'm a tea-belly too, although I always start my morning with a coffee... thanks for your lovely feedback as always. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Debra,

Ha ha ha! I am laughing with, not at, you. This is a great write, my friend, and an excellent contest entry. Your fist fight line had me laughing out loud. Thanks for the laugh and good luck in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Hi Jan :)
    Thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)