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Comment from dovemarie
Dear Kim, Sounds like you want privacy, being "unlisted." Haven't heard from you for a long time. I'm glad you're back with the NaPoWriMo contest. Thanks for giving the description of the "Sapphonic Triad." I will try to write one myself. Good luck in the contest. Donna (Dove)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Dear Kim, Sounds like you want privacy, being "unlisted." Haven't heard from you for a long time. I'm glad you're back with the NaPoWriMo contest. Thanks for giving the description of the "Sapphonic Triad." I will try to write one myself. Good luck in the contest. Donna (Dove)
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi Donna -
I promise to get around to some reviewing... it is partly why I've been away so long, I just haven't had the kind of time to do it all justice. The community deserves the interaction :) I appreciate the wonderful comments!
Kim
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A very modern day Sapphonic Triad Kim about the fantasy of switching off the phone to the outside world. Me personally that wouldn't worry, but for some what anxiety it would bring. I'm sure your Muse will be there for you phone or not. LOL,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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A very modern day Sapphonic Triad Kim about the fantasy of switching off the phone to the outside world. Me personally that wouldn't worry, but for some what anxiety it would bring. I'm sure your Muse will be there for you phone or not. LOL,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi Valda,
I'd try not to be anxious, but something tells me it would drive me crazy lol Though, I do like to just get away and do my own thing from time to time. Thank you for the wonderful comments.
Kim
Comment from sunnilicious
Life has changed plenty over the past few decades. Communications is an imperative. A phone ringing constantly can be plenty to handle. Sometimes, it's smart to know when to let everything go to voicemail.
Great poem.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Life has changed plenty over the past few decades. Communications is an imperative. A phone ringing constantly can be plenty to handle. Sometimes, it's smart to know when to let everything go to voicemail.
Great poem.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Alicia. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. :)
Kim
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Kim. Good job with this piece. LOL! I've often wondered if phone-a-holics are tempted to bash them against a rock sometimes. I don't have one of the new-fangled phones. I have an old Tracfone that suits me just fine and a land line. I like to be where people can't always find me. Your Sapphonic Triad proves my point, that they are intrusive. Marilyn
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi Kim. Good job with this piece. LOL! I've often wondered if phone-a-holics are tempted to bash them against a rock sometimes. I don't have one of the new-fangled phones. I have an old Tracfone that suits me just fine and a land line. I like to be where people can't always find me. Your Sapphonic Triad proves my point, that they are intrusive. Marilyn
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi Marilyn -
You are right on many levels! lol I like to have my phone - when I want it, other times, not so much! Thanks for the fun comments!
Kim
Comment from lyenochka
Well done, Kim! I was slow to accept the cell phone because I had to use one of those huge clunky ones when I was on call for work - so bad memories. But yes, we can get pretty tied to our pocket computers!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Well done, Kim! I was slow to accept the cell phone because I had to use one of those huge clunky ones when I was on call for work - so bad memories. But yes, we can get pretty tied to our pocket computers!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi Helen,
This was a fun write. I just hope my Muse keeps checking in all month, or I could be in trouble lol I appreciate your time and comments.
Kim
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Not sure, Kim. We are all so dependent on our electronic devices that we would trade one for another. Good job with your sapphonic triad. Your well-chosen words fit the style well. The picture is a great pairing with your words, too. thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Not sure, Kim. We are all so dependent on our electronic devices that we would trade one for another. Good job with your sapphonic triad. Your well-chosen words fit the style well. The picture is a great pairing with your words, too. thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi Jan -
Sometimes the phones are a godsend... other times, not so much lol I loved your comments! :) Thanks for spending some time with me today!
Kim
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Saphonic Triad. It seems to be a short and sweet little piece, but I know how much time it takes to get it perfectly right and still make sense with a message to give.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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A very well-written Saphonic Triad. It seems to be a short and sweet little piece, but I know how much time it takes to get it perfectly right and still make sense with a message to give.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi Sandra -
Short and sweet isn't always my nature, so you've pegged it right, it isn't always easy to get the thoughts condensed into the format. I appreciate your compliments.
Kim
Comment from Sasha
I got a real kick out of his one. I just purchased a smart phone and think it is the stupidest thing I have ever done. I have had it two week and still do not know how too operate it. Why do they make them so darn complicated? People my age should not be allowed to get a smart phone. I agree you should set it up so only your muse can contact you. That is a great idea and a terrific poem for NaPoWriMo Day 4.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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I got a real kick out of his one. I just purchased a smart phone and think it is the stupidest thing I have ever done. I have had it two week and still do not know how too operate it. Why do they make them so darn complicated? People my age should not be allowed to get a smart phone. I agree you should set it up so only your muse can contact you. That is a great idea and a terrific poem for NaPoWriMo Day 4.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi Sasha!
I truly hate getting a new phone lol There are those that always have to trade for the latest and greatest technology... I'm more like... Do I have to? lol until I manage to break mine somehow and am forced to upgrade. Thanks for the fun review!
Kim
Comment from Pantygynt
Cell phones these days keep getting thinner and smarter... people the opposite (Anonymous - found on Cool Funny Quotes.com)
What happens when
phones waste away?
They'll vanish. Then
roll on the day!
No more I'll be tied to a phone,
no more a slave.
Fat, stupid and alone.
This was quite a tough one to day. Got there in the end though.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Cell phones these days keep getting thinner and smarter... people the opposite (Anonymous - found on Cool Funny Quotes.com)
What happens when
phones waste away?
They'll vanish. Then
roll on the day!
No more I'll be tied to a phone,
no more a slave.
Fat, stupid and alone.
This was quite a tough one to day. Got there in the end though.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi Jim!
What flattery to have a co-creator of the Sapphonic Triad write one back to me in reply :) Love it!! Thank you!
Kim
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I remember doing these lase year for the April contest and I admire you for doing this one as I remember how hard they can be. Very nicely done for the book
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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I remember doing these lase year for the April contest and I admire you for doing this one as I remember how hard they can be. Very nicely done for the book
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi Barb -
You did a tremendous job with these last April! Thank you for the wonderful compliment!
Kim
